Ok ... this is cool. You mamaged to make this EXTREMELY out-of-canon pairing work ... while keeping the subjects almost completely IN character. Nice trick. Now where's the rest of the story?

I love the story so far.

Are you okay?

I ask cuse you have not update the story in over two years and I am just dying to read the end of it.

John

Awesome story. The way you made the Ranma kuno Pairing was realistic. The reactions to the characters were realistic. Kudos for not using the drug clishe' on kuno and instead using insanity. Is there a sequal in the works?

Been too long! UPDATE!

Prologue
she had collect
[collected]

Her associates bonus
[associates’?]

Well there’s a perfectly good explanation for that. Ferrets stole my brain.
[That was funnier than half of the chapter]

heh nice. kuno WAS the only semi-honorable revile aka. only attacked one on one and never by surprise.

I really really love this story. I love how you wrote Tatewaki, making his insanity part of his charm, and making him a gentlemen in his own delusional ways and how that fits in with Ranma. You gave the character depth. I really really want to see a scene when he finally learns that Ranma's a guy though. And i can't wait for Shampoo to implode.

I skipped this story the first time I went through your library, Kuno being one of my least favorite Ranma characters (except as a punching bag)at the time. But then I read "Queen Rat" and was rather surprised by the part Kuno played. So when I was going through your library again I decided to check it out - there's some potential for Kuno after all, and hey, you wrote it! I'm very glad I did, it's a great story - I'd say you achieved your goal of making a believable romance between Ranma and Kuno with flying colors. The only problem is that it's been almost a year without an update! While I have no problem with "A Time Apart" and "Hell Is a Martial Artist" getting first priority, having this one come in third would make me very happy. (Of course, that's only a degree of happiness - seeing an update of almost any of your stories would make me happy.)

Oh may GOSH I'm enjoying this. Ranma and Kuno are as beautiful as Ranma and Ryoga... GOD, Iwish them good luck... now.. about the updates... *gives update-me eyes*

Great story, the best kuno x Ranma-chan i've ever read (the only one but let's not go into details) and it actually makes so perfect sense, I loved how you made it, I hope there is more to the story.

I was skeptical of the premise, but I find myself really enjoying this fic. You are a very talented writer. I hope that you continue this story.

Wow I never thought I'd be able to read a story with Kuno and well Ranma O.o the concept is alien to me but still really good I just didn't think their was anybody gutsy enough to try and pull it off without the plot devices you mentioned earlier!!

horribly creepy but I couldn't stop reading it.

Only you could make this work, and I for one hope you finish it eventually, good job.

fallowing are out of character.

Ranma,
problems:
Too angry, Ranma is very level headed, when he gets irritated and stressed he doesnt level buildings like akane does.
throwing lamps and the like, kuno particularly doesnt enrage ranma like akane does either, while true at the beginning of the manga and ranma's nightmares, near and till the end kuno is a nuisance, a bug that wont quit, a cat that wont shut up.
you practicaly glossed over akane and ranmas feelings here, this is intergral to the story because it takes place shortly after jusendo!
Finaly, You force Akane and Ranma to become observant to only certain things, Akane and Ranma would realise that they could go off on their own on the pretense of akane seeking ritious revenge if akane can chase him off for a date with kuno! remember, these two love eachother by the end of the manga, EVERYONE KNOWS IT. nabiki, kasumi, they both risked the ultimate price for eachother! if you dont explain what changes this it sinks before it starts
Kuno.
I'm not feeling it when kuno is shown the curse again. It needs something more persuasive, great use of his history to connect him to Ranma, but Kino is so delusional that he had people fighting for akane every day for her hand. something SERIOUS needs to happen for him to get it, not just another demonstration.