Reviews for My Dirty Little Secret

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Jordan McKenzie 2008-02-11 ch 9,	abuseOkay, so what do I have to do to get you to write a sequel to this story? I LOVED this story. I've just recently discovered the remake of the tv series (my Heavens, couldn't you just squeeze Stuart Townsend in two)... uh, anyway... This story was so well written. Your imagery was fantastic and your plot was well executed! Bravo, my dear! Now get to work on that sequel or I may have to send Carl (as his new alter ego) to get you! Jordan
ezrajade 2006-07-09 ch 9,	abuseAwesome! The imagery and descriptions were amazing and you really kept everyone in-character. I had the same thought after that first episode, with the hellhounds and the mark...I thought maybe there might be a little werewolfness going down. I would absolutely love a sequel...you did a great job.
Siriel the treelady 2006-06-20 ch 9,	abuseWow. This was amazing! Interesting concept, well executed. You did a great job of taking the two separate threads of the story and bringing them together. Everyone's in character (except of course for the weird stuff happening to Kolchak, which is part of the story), and the general atmosphere matches that of the show pretty well. There were just a couple of editing mistakes I noticed. In chapter 5, you said "Initially, he was screwed." That use of the word 'initially' doesn't quite make sense; perhaps you were thinking of some other word? Also, you several times throughout use the word "led" where I think you mean "lead", as in the phrase "led-heavy fatigue" in chapter 6. Other than that, brilliant. If you can you should definitely do a sequel, or prequel. It would be good to find out more about why and how it happened that he became a werewolf, and more about who or what those creepy voices are.
Faith-Catherine 2005-11-23 ch 9,	abuseI think a sequel would be awesome and hopefully more Perri and Carl interaction. I love those two together and your writing style would be perfect for the story. So please write a sequel! :)
LoneTread 2005-11-15 ch 7,	abuseBecause this seemed the quickest way to respond to your review (I do so wish they'd come up with a better one): Thanks for the nice review on my story. It's very much appreciated. Although, when I said 'epilogue', that was what I meant. It was only that I was expecting people to want me to tell them things like what ended up happening with Norfolk, etc., and I was being preemptive. Thanks, anyway. It's nice to get reviews from good writers, rather than the "wow, waht a good stroy", y'know? :) Well, until the next story, then...
fateful_destiny 2005-11-14 ch 9, anon.	abuseSequel please! I loved this!
LoneTread 2005-11-14 ch 9,	abuseWow. claps If you don't do a sequel, you should at least keep writing in this fandom; you're very good at it. But if you think you can live up to the precedent you've set with this story, I, for one, have no objections to a sequel. I'm just worried about how bad my fic's going to look in comparison to this one. :) Nice work.
Penny 2005-11-13 ch 9, anon.	abuseI like the new Night Stalker series (and I do remember the old series). This was an excellent story! The plot, the characterization, the writing...I enjoyed it all. It also is a good theory as to what the red mark on Carl's wrist signifies...he has been marked for change or death, his choice. Again, great story. If anyone but the author reads the reviews to help them decide if a story is worth the time, believe me this one is.
nykky 2005-11-12 ch 9,	abuseI really enjoyed this story and I hope you decide to continue writing for night stalker as it is a very good show. Very well written and executed.
Andromeda Silver 2005-11-11 ch 9,	abuseVery nice ending. I like how you write Carl immensely. I think this story stands pretty well on its own. I'm not too sure exactly how you would continue this story anyway, but you're the author and not me. Wonderful work!
LoneTread 2005-11-10 ch 8,	abuseWow. That was...brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Andromeda Silver 2005-11-09 ch 7,	abuseI knew it! I knew that Carl had to be turning into something like a werewolf! I'm really liking this story; you write the characters well and your description is wonderful. It's crystal clear and always leaves me wanting more story. Here and there you've had typos, such as mixing up "to" and "too" once. There were two instances of you using an odd phrase for comparisons...I'm probably not remembering it too well, but back in about Chapter 3 when Carl, Perri, and Jain went to the widower's house with the baby you wrote something along the lines of, "All was quiet as for the baby gurgling." I think you meant, "All was quiet save for the baby gurgling." It's a strange phraseology anyway. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Ice Queen1 2005-11-08 ch 6,	abuseI still really like this story. Finding new chapters so quickly makes my dad...seriously. And I really like the mystery in this, that Carl has no idea what's going on (though for some reason, I'm thinking werewolf, dunno why though). Great story so far, I like Carl's inner thoughts on this story. Good job and looking forward to the next update.
LoneTread 2005-11-05 ch 1,	abuseI just thought I'd mention, in case you weren't aware of it, that it's possible to request a new category. In fact, it seems pretty simple. All you have to do is email "with all the necessary details." I'd do it myself, but you have to have a story to submit there (which, obviously, you do). So, if you feel like it, that's an option. That's all. Until the next chapter, then.
LoneTread 2005-11-05 ch 4,	abuseGlad to help. (On a related note, I don't think you just pulled "Anthony" out of thin air; it seems likely that you got it from the name of the editor on the show. So no worries, you're not losing it.) :) Anyway, once again, it's awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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