... Oh. I read a chain letter like this once. I think that it's what you based it off, right?... It made me sad...

I really liked this story. I liked the way it was written and the ending was a surprise. It was a really sad ending and it leaves a question unanswered, if Seto knew about the brakes and if he was the one to damage them.

...I wasn't expecting that ending! Oh, how could you? I can't believe you killed him off!

Despite nearly giving me a heartattack with that ending, I really enjoyed reading this!

I think...I think that you just killed me. I did NOT expect that ending but it was so incredibly amazing! Bravo for a well written piece of work, and for all of your other works as well. I have now read every single one of your stories and I love them all! Good job!

-Jace
(pathera)

I liked your fic but there should be a warning.
I don't read charecter death fics and I not the only one.
I know it would spoil the effect but I don't like to read sad fics.
Anyway I did like your fic it was well written

omg he died!!
no
wahh
*emo sad*

Oh I didn't expect such a sad end. You made cry with an end like this one. It was so unpredictible. They seemed so happy together and then...
Anyway, very good oneshot.

Cruelty to charaters! How could you do that to poor little Jou? This fic was amazingly touching, and the ending is so sad...
-GRose522

oh! i don't know where i heard this from but I remember hearing about the guy who sacrificed himself for the girl by giving her his helmet. *sigh* my heart felt like someone squeezed it. Same thing with this fic! so sad!!

AW! SO SAD! He knew. How? (Please tell me it wasn't suicide) That's so sweet, that the last thing he'd hear would be his twoo wuv pledging his undying love for him. Sob! And he even protected him at the cost of his life. That's the kind of angsty ending I like, if a fic HAS to end angstyly.

:O omg, i can't believe you did that!

omg.. so sad..

Good fanfic. The ending was unexpected.

i read a story like this a million times.

but involving straight couples. xD

AH!

I didn't see that coming! Aw man that's SO unbelievably sad.

I loved it but I feel utterly depressed right now...

*goes off to mourn*