wow, i like this story, so emotionally charged, and it has many layers, truly awesome :D

I hope Naruto shows just how strong he is without having to use any Kyuubi chakra. That will show the missing nin leader how much rubbish his ideas about Naruto are. Naruto must be so releaved that Shikamaru doesn't view him as Kyuubi. I hope that after this mission is done Naruto gets a chance to deck Shiro for his behavior the whole time.

liked this chapter. update soon!

nice chapter, I'm curious as to how the others will react to the full news of what happened

I have decided that I truly hate Nami Shiro. What an insolent little prick. I wouldn't even be surpised if later on he allies with Sound and Orochimaru, the little git.

do continue with the story. I want to see what happens to that rich snob.(seriously)

I really want to see Shiro piss his pants or be paralyzed by fear and have one of the ninja save him. That'll shut him up! Nice Romantic Naru/Hina moment, you should have more!

very nice, the mood is coming across strongly and the pacing has pretty nice feel to it.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

It's a little confoosing...And I wish Shiro could see Hinata kick some butt! lol

why such huge plot changes compared to the one you were following earlier...

Why have Naruto and Hinata suddenly come so distant and cold, and what happened to the chuunin exam...

I must say this story line seems identical to KlosetAuthor 's "Hinata's story"...

But I'll continue to read anyway since there isn't much else to do...

Um liking this please keep up the goodwork and update soon,

I hate Shiro already. I hope Sakura and Hinata get to show they're just as good as the guys and Naruto shows he is stronger than he appears! I wonder how Shiro would treat Tsunade if she appeared to be an ordinary kunoichi and would he survive the experience?

Solid characterization (especially Hinata) and pacing make this an enjoyable read. The dual characterization you did during the apartment scene in chapter two was excelent. In chapter three you used 'in spite' where it should be 'in spite of' or 'despite'. Also in chapter three hall is mispelled- 'The group walked down the all...'. The ends of your chapters are well done. They feel like natural stopping or transition points.

WOW!This is probably one of the best fics I've read so far and the stories hasn't even started yet! Its perfect! Not to insult but I only checked this out on a whim, the summary didn't do it any justic! But I'm glad I did. Update soon and good luck!