awee! This Shakespearean tragedy at its best! Brava! and I think it's fantastic for written so quickly!

Mudblood & Pureblood never blended so perfectly before.

That line just hit me out of the blue. Perfect for a story like this. ^-^

Kudos that you didn't make Narcissa turn on Draco. Then again, who would turn on someone they pained to bring into the world?

heh heh loved the PS. Again, excellent work. It leaves readers to think a bit. This is really good for just being written in an hour to kill time.
F.G.

I wish you went into more detail when Drace was dieing. A little cheesey of how she killed herself too. And a little unclear and out of the blue when Hermione told him that she loved him. Other than that, good story.

Wow...I seriously wouldn't have commented if it wasn't for the "the review button is calling out to you" lol. It's not because this is a bad fic, in fact it's Amazing. I just am too tired right now...seeing that it's 1 in the morning...but nevertheless...I'm commenting. I love the ending sentence. So perfect. It's kinda...hmm about Hermione killing Lucious...but still a great fic. Poor Draco.. Keep up the great work.

That was umm *** head to the side* odd? sweet? wierd? you pick.

talk about Romeo and Juliet

OMG WOW powerfulli like it

helloo? hello? i answered but no body was home...sod..naw good job!

wow, that was a good story, though it reminded me of Romeo and Juliet ALOT,
Kat

OMG.
I'm gonna cry. Stop making me cry...
I like it. But I like happy endings. Haha, imagine that, me, Vampire Girl, liking happy endings.
...don't ask.

so sweet im crying!
almost!

I still have tears into my eyes, it's just so heartbreaking.
It's just so sad, and you can't change a thing about it, it's just so unfear that they could never be with eachother before.

kizzies Marie-lou.

im a religious/spiritual person.. so i detest the idea of suicide.. even if it is for the one you love.

But the fic was written well, i have to say that.Ü