amusing, if nothing else. 6/10 for fic.

assome!! that was so. col. you have to UPDATE REALLY SOON!

funky story! quite funny too!

Well, definitely caught my intrest. Hmm, wonder why Ira looks like Harry, you say Harry will be trained by the time he gets to Hogwarts? I doubt training like that in 3 months. SO does that mean he uses some type of time manipulation thing? Maybe Ira is Harry... Hmm after all, you did say something yawned when they dropped in, that could be Harry's pet.

Hmm I want to know!

Keep up the good work!

Very nice. When you are ready to post your next chapter, I hope to read it. I enjoy your storyline very much. It is different than most.

If you have time in between, I have some new chapters posted for my Tom and Harry story. I enjoy getting feedback from other writers.

Old-Crow

Wow!

That was quite the first chapter. On to two.

Old-Crow

OH MY GOD! It is very good story!! Oh by the way, ar you viet??

Wierd, but still a good chapter. Im guessing the big lizard thing was that creature that luna always talked about.

Great Chapter im about to read the next.

hm interesting
proeliator umbra? something like shadow warrior if i remember latin
did he get a Crumple Horned Snorkack i really dont know where that came from just a guess
anyways intriguing story continue updating and such

great start cant wait for more

col! definitely interesting.update soon! it's a great start by the way.

I like this, and I'm looking forward to an update, but PLEASE please take off you annonymous review blocker!

Intersting start, though a little confusing. And I agree with what you said, Harry and Hermione are meant to be together! SO, please update soon!
Loneicedragon

Great, cant wait to see how it works out keep up the good work Dan.