Very good. I can see it in cinematic terms too. Love the way Luce isn't sure what to feel about his enemy dying on the cross - like he's partially shouting those things to tempt Jesus and discourage his followers, but partiallt because he honestly doesn't understand.

Very nice.

this is such a huge undertaking, and you excelled. amazing. and believeable too.
great job.
I wish I could see more stories like this around fanfiction. =/

Satan trying to help Jesus? Now that deserves a laugh. The story is well-written. I actually can see the drama being played out. Thank you.

wow...
i just reed and i like it, well done. :)

hadn't really thought of looking at it from this perspective, it's chilling. It gave me the shivers. (which means it was really good.)

An interesting point of view. One thing, though - I read somewhere in the Bible that Satan does not have access to our minds; only God does. Other than that, this makes me feel happy, knowing that Satan is forever defeated!

wow... 0_0

THIS IS SERIOUSLY ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING THINGS I HAVE EVER READ!

Wow, this puts a whole new prospective on the crucifixion. You showed that the devil really is the father of lies, pure evil. Nice!

Wow!

A very moving rendidtion of the crucifixion that lets you see everything you never really saw before... VERY GOOD!

Hey,
That was great. I love your writing. That seemed SO real. Good job! I imagined Satan like the one in 'the passion of the christ'. Have you ever seen that movie? If you havent you should. I loved it.
God Bless,
-Miranda-

This is REALLY GOOD!

Wow. Just...wow. I'm not particularly religious and I was still deeply moved by this story. I love that you gave Satan his own thoughts and motivations; in a twisted way he believes that he is doing the right thing and that somehow makes him all the more frightening. There's not really much else I can say. Beautifully executed.

Stunning.

Yum, Satan.

You do know the Christ and Satan were lovers right>?

It is Satan's POV so it's hard to decide whether to include this in the archive but undeniably, it's there, the crucifixion. this is full of good stuff too... kudos for the writing. So I must decide... well... ok. add this in the archive.

nice concept. good story. appreciates it much.