Great job. I like Remus and hermione together. They just work so well. I love it. You did agreat job getting all the needed elemants in this to make this great.You really did a great job.

~Tori

thats a very sad story. sirus is such a jerk in this..felt bad for mione.

but mione was so dumb at the end blabbing thinking it was sirus. she should've known it was not sirus. lmfao since when does sirus (your sirus in this story anyway) ever sit near mione while shes crying and hugging her or whatever. haha. never.

anyway sad but good

That was so sweet!

I loved it. I think there are many ways of painting the Marauders in fics, and when you do something to one of them you sort of have to do the contrasting one to the other. I'm probably not making any sense, but I just wanted to let you know, that even though it wasn't my favourite moment for Sirius it was definitely and honest one. He had a rough life and it's understandable for him to be a little screwed up in an emotional sense.

I think you captured everyone's characters wonderfully. You showed their flaws and strengths. I think my favourite moment was when Harry offered to go check on Hermione but then Sirius won out. As much as I hate to admit, I think that Harry would let Sirius win out over Hermione mainly just because he's the last link to his parents.

If you would like to read a really good Marauders oneshot that shows some beautiful character developments, I suggest you read "When Saints Die The World Stops Spinning" by forsakenphoenix at

I didn't write it, but it has to be one of my favourite one-shots out there.

Wow this is a random review for me, I don't usually put so much effort into reviews but your story struck a chord with me I guess.

Keep writing.

i really like your story
artfully written
i hope to see more of this
great story!
sincerely,
ange

good story, loved it!

That was a sweet story ^^ I liked it ^^

Gr at Sirius, but aw for Remus, i always pictured him to be the most romantic Marauder. And it shows he is, Remus is better than Sirius, and Hermione knows that now, although she might have known that before, if she wasn't blinded by Sirius' charm.

I want to see more of this - what happens to Remus and Hermione, and does Remus ever tell Sirius what he did?

aw. i think i have a toothache. that was so sweet. it was the best oneshot i've read. good job:D
luve
Janie

Aw.
That was so sweet. I don't really like how you portrayed Sirius, though. Even though that's probably how he would've acted. Remus and Hermione are so much alike so they go really good together. Awesome fic, though! I really enjoyed it!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

oh my god! i never really liked remus/mione stories...but now! my lord! that was so sweet! i am hoping that if i look at your other stories there will be a part two! but if not please please please for the love of everything fluffy and good...write one!!

keep up the good work!!


E.P.

that was kinda sad but it was cool. i loved the end.
will there be a sequel or something?

LOVE IT! That was really good, i'll be reading more of yours.