I like this story, it's...can't think of word to some it up; aside from all the typo's making it a little hard to read

this is awesome! keep up the fantastic work!

YEAH! yopopo! he's my favorite mamodo! im lookin to seein him!

hilarious bobobo reference! nice job!

ive only started to read ur story, but its great so far. also, im exactly 16 so could u tell wats the beef between reycom and yuki?

i just started reading this one and i already love it
i realy hope you put Clear Note in to this story because clear is one of my favorite bad guy in any of te manga i read i think sengaku(marine supreme commander) would be a good partner for him because clear's powers revolve around annihilation and sengaku wants to annihilate all pirates everywhere

wait, wat about kid? He seen more likey 2 believe usopp.

YAY! He's comin!

Nice work on this update as always!

Sincerely,
AshK

Two chapters in and no character description of your OC. Shame on you.

Just looking at the character descriptions... you know you could've used Kid/Kiddo for Usopp, right? It's canon that he believes every lie he's told.

How's this for an idea? After the whole Millenium Mamodo arc is over and done with how about you start the Skypeia saga and everything after that. I can just imagine all of the cool things that could happen because of it.

Well...uh...um...drat. I can't think of anything that isn't cliche` or lame.

I look forward to more spectacular works from you.

You know you keep spelling Claws as Craws right? Craw...crawfish...*drool* Great, now I'm hungry again. *sigh* oh well.

Good story so far. I have high hopes for the rest of the chapters.

I look forward to more spellbinding woprks from you. (pun SO intended)

This is a pretty good chapter. When I have more time, I will try to read and review the rest of it. Good work!

Sincerely,
AshK