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| wild wolf free17 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseStunning. |
| Jessica 2006-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse:o The last line gave me goosebumps! That was AMAZING! :) |
| wearing a heart 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abusei love it. |
| neuroticperoxideblonde 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseamazing piece! it's awesome. |
| Nuwanda-is-all 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseveryb conceptive.excellent job! |
| Noktalune 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseLife-Fright... huh, I'm going to have to steal that from you. Lovely story, I like the fact that you took the overall picture of Neil on stage and than broke it down into bite-size pieces. I think that if you really wanted to get into this, it could go longer, but I like it the way it is. Good read! Nice job! |