*faints*
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
I'm a young, naive kid who believes that the world should be a better place.

PFFFFFFFFFFFT.
Wow. Angel/Devil things. LOL.

Oh yeah- Nice job with the kisses - Literal and figuratively - nice.

*cries into hands again*
"OTZ
TT_TT

...You use the same lines.
Like "But Ran hadn't spent her whole life around detectives and police without picking up some critical thinking skills." Specifically "Critical thinking skills."
これは本当にすごいね？かわいい！

*cries into hands*
T_T this is beautiful.
*sobs uncontrollably*

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WOOOOOOOW.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW.
*goes to drown my self*

I cried. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME, THIS IS FANFICTION! I had tears in my eyes and one actually fell down my cheek. What?!

Obviously, this one was good.

I have seen this story up on Detective Conan/Case Closed stories at one of the top stories and have promissed myself to get around to it.
it was better that i thought.
you're writing it very descriptive and full of amazing vocabulary.
I can tell you chose each and every word carfuly.
This story is amazing and I can't wait to continue!

Jimmy should be with me...not that stupid cryer rachel...i dont know why someone would put this here,its not resonable!HES MINE!

Hahahahahahahaha. 'Must pick on Shinichi' ))

Next time make him propose

That's it? TT I had sooo much fun reading this... sabishii desu wa!

I prefer the Ran one. After all, Wouldn't it be funny, when Kazuha sees heiji with the pic? LOL.

And then the cycle continues with Heiji and Kazuha.