Simply lovely.

nice

now THAT was awesome!
Write more!

wow um really good plot hahahahaha i especially love how you make them fight and have them be intimate ... you use loads of decription and it made it so fun to read well i think you should write more stories like this ... slash lovers unite! ! !

oo a little game of hide and seek eh? KINKY ... i like it when the passion just overcomes you errupting into a jangle of testes illongation of caged wild beasts and the infiltration of virgin ** addicts

oh my lovely writer of beautiful words
keep writing these glorious melodies
and i'll keep sitting by myself after
a hard day at work, releasing my own tension
to the sexual afflictions you create

oo baby baby oo baby baby