 Laine Breaker 2006-10-30 . chapter 1 ME AGAIN, ITS CUTE, U REALLY LIEK DAN, SO HOW BOUT A CON AND DAN PAIRING, LIKE DAN IS A HELLION BUT THE ONLY THING TAHT KEEPS HIM INTRESTED IS WHEN HE GETS TO SEE CON AND TEAZE ABOUT HIS BLINDNESS AND MAKE HIS EARPHONES FULL BLAST AND MESS UP HIS SENSES AND WATCH HIM ACT LIKE A REAL BLIND KID AND BUMP INTO WALLS AND WHEN CON TRIES TO GET AWAY, dAN COMES OUT NO WHERE AND KISSES HIM, IT GETS CON TO BLUSH AND SAY UR AN ASS, BUT DAN WILL " ONLY TO U, U LITTLE RUNT" THEN CON WILL BLUSH, AND SAY" PEDOPHILE", THEN DAN WILL KISS HIM AND THIS TIME, CON GET INTO IT AND DAN RIPS OFFS HIS SHORTS AND U CAN LIEAVE IT AT DAT, ITS JUST A SUGGETION |
 G to the Eh 2005-11-10 . chapter 1I really liked the story, although it might be a little too short--I'm not nagging you to write a sequel or anything (I hate people who do that >_>) but the fact that we don't see Kevin react to Dan's prepared speech, or Dan reacting to Kevin's lack of reaction for that matter, makes it feel a bit half-finished.
That's my only gripe; I really liked it besides that. I don't think Dan is all that far off-character--I can actually picture him preparing most of his speeches beforehand, but then I like to think he's not the ultimate badass he reckons he is, so this might just be me. XD And I have to say, as a fan of slash and of strange pairings, I liked the concept behind the 'fic. Even if they'd be a rather odd-looking couple. :D |