Impressive! Well told! Like all your readers, I hope you soon find the time to again share your story telling talents with us. Again, thank you for this wonderful tale!

In canon, the wedding took place on Harry's 17th birthday, making him an adult and able to do magic. Also, if the cut on Dan's thumb was made by the goblin made sword of Griffindor, the absorbed venom from the basilisk and manicore should have killed him - not to mention Tom due to the wound from the fight at the Burrow. I assume we're going AU for that part. Still, enjoying this story very much!

nice start

Great story! I enjoyed reading it. A bit unrealistic at some points, but what st ory isn't?! I felt the final fight with Voldemort's forces ended too well for th e good guys and some of the bad guys sho uld've put up a MUCH better fight, but t hat could just be me.

You win. You win, so hard. I can't believe you surprised me with that last line there, but you got me good.

I enjoyed this story a lot, though I think your writing improved significantly towards the second half of this story. I can't say I feel they all acted intelligently throughout, but it wasn't unrealistically dumb. I liked the way you portrayed the moments of intimacy between Harry and Hermione. They were short, sweet, and graphic without being gratuitous. This was quite a good read, and I appreciate you posting it. Best of luck on any stories you may start in the future.

There are a few quintessential stories that no Harmonian should go without reading, Vox Corporis, Notebooks and Letters, Eigth, Breakfast in New York, No Thanks, More Important Than Any Broomstick, Time is the Fire, HP and the Last Horcrux, and maybe one or two more I would come up with if I sat and thought about it for a while, there should definitely be at least one from Robst on that list but I'm not sure which. This story also makes that list.

I know this was published more than half a dozen years ago and I'm not sure if you'll even see this message but I want to thank you for producing and sharing with all of us one of the true classics of Harmony.

It was also a pretty cool little coincidence how you had them dealing with a dragon and ending up going from a swim in order to get the cup.

Awesome fic and I am sorry I waited till the end to review but I just couldn't wait to finish it completely. I loved how you took an idea JK should have had and ran with it. The way you did the relationship with Harry and Hermione was awesome, Neville with Katie was unexpected but great and Ron should have been Luna's in canon. The story was great and very well done, never a boring moment. I like the names for Harry and Hermione's children and the way you finished was great the ending was very awesome as was the entire fic all 13 chapters. Very well done.

Beautiful story, beautiful ending. Really couldn't have expected it to go any different. Can't say much else besides a job very well done. Congrats on a great story.

AZ

So sad. Great job though. I was always a little upset that JKR didn't do more at the wedding party. It would've been a great way to start of their hunt, with a character death like that. Also, I was impressed with the way you handled Ron and Ginny acting like they did. Usually when writers turn Ginny and Ron against Harry and Hermione, they just make them act like assholes. I like how you used their grief as a tipping point. Good job.

AZ

I'm really enjoying this story but I thought I would point out that you have been forgetting some of your punctuation, particularly your opening points of a pair, like quotation marks or parenthesis. Just a helpful suggestion. Again, love the story so far.

AZ

The author is commended for the great characterizations in this story. Hermione managed to annoy me at times and applaud her at others. Harry wasn't some caricature hero without fears and insecurities. Ron grew up! I really appreciate it didn't happen overnight but we got to see the progression.
Without Albus in the mix, Harry got to have assistance with his tasks. It may have seemed too easy to him, but without his 'family' and friends it would have been near impossible.
Kudos to the shlamboozle for a well written adventure.

i'm still sad about hedwig :(

Great story I really enjoyed it!

I can only hope you don't have Harry and hermione dancing around their relationship for the whole story... I really dislike that JK always showed Harry as rather slow with a low sense of self worth, hopefully you can solve those issues here :)

awesome story with some interesting twists and many surprises too...
once I started reading I couldn't stop until I reached the end... even if it took me a day to do it :)