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RitualKitten
2009-09-10 . chapter 10
I absolutely adore this fic- the relationship between Neji and Sakura is very well developed and emotionally sound, versus the somewhat superficial and rushed feeling to most fics. There is actually a background behind their relationship instead of a sudden epiphany regarding the other, and frankly it's very moving. It's sad that this hasn't updated in so long, has it been discontinued or is it simply on hiatus?
whitedeathangel03
2009-08-10 . chapter 10
you should update if possible :)
Bai MeiEr
2009-06-03 . chapter 10
Beautiful story you have here. I love the way you outline the complex relationship between Neji and Sakura, as well as the stunning imagery you use. All in all, a job very well done. *applauds*

But for the sake of my detailed critiquing habit, I do feel that some aspects could be improved on. For one, I think that it's highly unrealistic for Neji to use as familiar a name as Hizashi and for Sasuke and Orochimaru to use their real names, a tad bit more so than I would like to have in a fanfic. Secondly, even though this is just a personal preference, I would really prefer if Sakura and Neji's relationship could be kept strictly non-romantic. I feel that your story is much more appealing and unique if they were kept as friends and helpers to each other, and when the romance started coming in I really started to lose interest.

But keep up the good work, and I hope to see more updates from you soon!
hoshia
2009-05-12 . chapter 10
So... you see, the flood of good nejisaku's fics nowadays it's really slow, nearly stopping.
Your history it's one of the best that I so patiently and hopefully wait for an update (and read sporadicly, just because).

Please, continue? ;)
Lovely Awakening
2009-03-30 . chapter 10
This is a really good story, but it hasn't been updated in a long time. D': Do you think you'll ever get around to it? If you ever do, I hope it's soon! I like your writing style.
beaBIANCA
2008-12-27 . chapter 10
This story is absolutely amazing. It's character progression is ridiculously detailed. I love it! Update soon! :D
Sinistera of the Akatsuki
2008-08-28 . chapter 10
keep it up i love it so far kk update soon please
Desiderada
2008-06-15 . chapter 10
hello! just leaving a review to tell you that your story is AWESOME! honestly, every time i re-read what you've written so far, i'm left amazed at what you've accomplished. seriously, this story outshines every other NejixSakura; plus, the character development is mind-blowing. keep up the good work! we all love you!
-Desiderada
al2010
2008-04-11 . chapter 10
I love your story so far. It's extremely original. I hope you continue soon. I like how Neji and Sakura's relationship from friendship to romantic feelings is developing at a believable pace.
CelestialMaidenofSilence
2008-03-23 . chapter 10
I love this story! Please update soon.
Liz
2008-02-19 . chapter 10
This story is wonderful! What is going to happen next?! dun dun dunn! :D You must update soon! I absolutely love this story. :)
SakuraxGaara1992
2008-02-08 . chapter 10
please write more??
i have a massive sakura x neji craving!!
Tis good :D
x
Kinomi-chan
2008-02-05 . chapter 10
I am absolutly in love with this story!! I absolutely can't wait to read more, but one question, isn't Sasuke Orochimaru now? I don't understand how Sasuke and Orochimaru could be there... I may just not be thinking straight, I don't know, it's 12:50 AM so, that's probably the reason... Ja ne!

~Kinomi-chan.
Kikis
2007-12-26 . chapter 10
You haven't given up, have you? *puppy eyes* Because I was looking for some real good neijisaku fic to read when I found yours. I don't have the right words to describe my admiration for your amazing and wonderful story. The writing is more than excellent, your plot is fabulous, and it makes us crave for more more more more *o* !
I love your Sakura. And your Neiji is just perfection!
Please, update soon :D!
Thanks and congrats!
Black Cat
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
Of all the Neji/Sakura stories I've read this is one of the few that has caught my attention and heald it like my dog holding onto her favourite chew toy. The sad thing is that you haven't updated in ages. I mean come on! It's the 19th of December. Please try and update before the end of the year is out.

yours annoyingly
Black Cat

P.S
Keep up the writing
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