OMG come on u have 2 finish

I love your story. I've read a lot of your work and I think you're a wonderful author. I really hope that you eventually write a sequal to this story because I very much want to know how they get Zack back. you're wonderful!

That was a great story but the ending was a cliffhanger. Can't wait till the sequel! Plz make one quickly!

"Escape and evade, while recognized as a valid command decision, was not something Zack could embrace on a long-term basis." I like that. I also enjoyed Max wondering if Zack would have been happier at Manticore; I've often wondered the same. You showed good character insight into Max and Zack in particular in this chapter. You handled storming Manticore well, although it was a little abrupt in some spots. You could have advertised that this story was complete! I think I told you I went and accidentally read the last few lines before I realized this was the end. A sequel would be good- not only so we could see Zack is still alive and kickin', but so we can see what all the kids do now that they've been reunited. I'm glad you brought this story to a close; it was the only WIP I had on my favorites list. Nice finish, and nice work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story as it unfurled.

Great read. It had a sad ending, but I'm glad that you told us that Zack's not dead. I wish the producers of the actual show, Dark Angel, would have show at least that much curtesy. Good job. I'll keep an eye out on your story although I wish I knew what you were going to call it.

ARGH! Hurry up with the sequel, this is one story I have really enjoyed.

Didn't want him to get captured, but it's your fic. Hope to see a sequel soon!

keep going!

Yay! You wrote some more! Yippee!

Now keep writing! Please, pretty please, cherry on top!

please continue soon. More m/z action. Don't make them fight all the time!

I think the title is fine. The story is moving right along. It was a long month to wait for more of this story but well worth it. :)

Woah! The tension! This assault on manticore sounds quite interesting, good luck writing it. The recollection of Max about Ben was very well written, very thoughtful. I look forward to seeing where you take this next.

That was a great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! Plz hurry this time!

Transition between Maxie's flashback and the present was a bit murky for me. Love the impressionistic style. It's too bad about Winter, really, but I guess he had an ill-fated sort of name. You did Ben well, I thought. Zack is harder in this chapter than we've seen him be in this fic; I like it. Zack asking if Max can handle herself is appropriate. I don't think you need to change the title; it confuses me when people change titles I've grown attached to. I know my titles rarely have much to do with the fic; besides, L'HB could be referring to any number of characters-Winter, Ben, (maybe even Lydecker if you worded the last chapter just right)- I never thought L'HB referred to Zack. Zack just isn't all that blue, especially not in this story.

I wonder how the others will take Max and Zach's relationship. Eagerly awaiting more.