Oh I thought your Love me, love me not was very cute. The knife scene made me laugh. Yeah I know I can be demonic. Ha ha ha. I also liked how you did the kissing scene. In most others I have read the characters are trying to eat each other's faces off which can be a little gross. It was sweet. I actually do a Xiaolin Showdown role play (my partner's name actually IS Clay Bailey! And Texan, too. Ironic, no?) but I do an OC and it has not made me like Kimiko very much (I have a link to it on my profile). xD However I did very much in this short story. I'm also glad that someone can write a love story with Clay that doesn't have Rai as the love. Clay is my favorite character and I just love cowboys. Overall it was a very wonderful story. I know you've said this, but the only thing that could have been improved was the first chapter. It doesn't need that much to make it better. Just a few more discriptions here and an extra sentence there just to give it some flow. I LOVED IT! I hope to see more!

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HOLY O_O

Clay! Dun do it! D:

I just love KimClay stories. This was really cute.

word. well, atleast it wasn't bad. and I never saw a clay romance before and it WAS what I was searching for. so it makes me glad to find one and no that clay is loved. U_U

oh, clays in troble!

Yay! I liked it! it was good! so continue plz. U_U

wait, so lemme get this straight... Clay likes Kimiko?

best best best!i love it!

I'm BACK! That was a great chapter...keep at it!

Heh heh heh...I like anything that isn't Raimiko. Not too bad actually.