I think I know where you're getting at, and I think it's a shame that the writers never got a chance to put it in the show. Then again, I guess that's what fanfiction is for.

I'd really like it if you would continue this story, so see where it leads. Can't wait to see (er...read) Dib's reaction when he finds out.

Still really good. I noticed a couple times when 'their' should have been 'there' (sorry, I can be a grammar nazi). EXPLAIN THE ARM! We demand answers. I like how you write Zim... you pretty much keep him in character.

E! Not human? You have me coming back for more

I LOVE this eppy. Its kinda gore-y, though. Its a little hard to understand Jen if you didnt read your other eppy(s).

anyway, I LOVE it so. I love youre aspect of suspense! Its awesome and yet it taunts me, how i hate/love it.

PLEZE write more tommorow! If you don't, i'll set your house aflame! well, no, not really, but you get the picture!

EarthStar Unicorn, singing, i mean signing, off!

Too short! To short!

This is another fic about Dib being… not human thingy?

Or maybe GIR put a plastic arm instead of the real one… XD

That was actually quite interesting and well written. I went into this rather skeptically, but I was surprised. Do continue

Oh, gee! What happens now?

I like this. You write well, and it's always pleasant to hear about limbs getting ripped off in silly elevator accidents. XD

I don't own the DVDs so I don't have any idea what you are talking about…

Anyway, I think I would like this story, but it is too early to know yet. So update soon!