hey u should continue w/the story it was great but u need 2 continue w/it.

WOW i love it

I don't usually read shorts very often but this one was really good. I like the attention you payed to detail when it came to heartbreaking things,such as the teddy bear. Hope you write more. Would love to read who's arms she is in.

I'm not a big one for shorts, but wow! Excellent work and such nice attention to heartbreaking detail like the teddy bear.

Hey good story. Hope theirs more to come. PLease update soon.I can't wait to find out who's arms it is.

Kristiana