hahaha totally cute poor rin she always gets the bad end

First off * sigh* I can't abide Romance/Humour's. >.< Ick. They're ucky. Now, Romance/Tragedy, too sad. Romance/Angst? Wahoo! ^_ _ _ _ _ _ _^(I hope it'll work this time, it screwed it up when I made it normal...)And... this was somewhat unrealistic. Sure, I'll go in for Sess/Rin lemons, which is, admittedly, entirely unrealistic, but hey—it's cool(well... not so much "cool" as really, really hot...). You have talent, but you need more practice. Practice makes almost perfect, you know!

^_^ YAY!! That was hilarious! hehehehehe! Especially when the jewel started talking...BWAHHAHAHAH!! I want you to do another one-shot that was good!
lovelovelovelovelove,
moonlitStarDestiny

WOW! I can't BELIEVE how you write your fanfics! They're FANTASTIC! They're humourous, with romance AND it fits the anime. I love your ryhme...Silver hair, Golden eyes...shut the hell up where hades lies...lmao XD can't wait for your next update...=^-^=

i loved it

Not to be rude, but you know that Hades isn't the same as hell right? Hades is a place in Greek mythology where everyone went and there were five rivers: Acheron, Cocytus, Phlegethon, Lethe and Styx. Of course each held a different purpose, but everyone went to Hades and accordingly, your soul was judged and it determined whether you were to forget your memories, live in eternal bliss, were to be reincarnated or of course, live as a tortured (equivalent to the musings of Hell) soul. AGAIN, I'm not trying to sound rude, just trying to help you out. ^.^ This was all written with the best of intentions and I enjoyed your story.

Finally reviewing...

Inuyasha: Feh, that was stupid.
Kagome: Inuyasha, Ouswari!
(Inuyasha hits ground)
Sesshoumaru: You'll never learn will you, hanyou.
Rin: I liked it. I got to kiss Sesshoumaur-sama (giggles)
Me: Very good. It was fun to read.

Yay! Good story...and you killed Naraku! WOO HOO!! :D Well, I would say more, but I have to go do chores!

Hm... Interesting... I would never have thought or a "space age" like story for the Inu gang... Hm... It was really funny! It was kind of rushed though. (Noh duh! That's why they call it a one shot right? Yeah, I'm kind of slow today...) It's such a good story that a little more detail would make it even better!

Like the parts where Kagura and Narku came in, it would have been nice to see a little more about why they were suposed to be married to Sesshomaru and Kagome. Hm... And the part at the end where Inu Yasha asks Kagome to marry him... It would have been nice if there was more dialogue from the two of them, leading up to that part.

I think that more detail could have been added to Sesshomaru and Rin's, and Inu Yasha and Kagome's relationship a little bit more so we get a feeling of how in love they are, and why they love each other.

Hm... For me, it was kind of weird how Sesshomaru and Kagome were brother and sister. That's just me though! When it comes to Inu Yasha stories, I'm really traditional in thinking that when Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru are in a story together, they should be brothers. But that's just me!

Overall, I really liked this story! It's too bad that it was a one shot or you could have added a lot more detail in the story to make it even better! You know, to get a better feel for the characters.
This story went by so fast! I was so sad when it ended! (So I read it again! ^ _ ~ *wink*)

Great fic! Keep on writing! ^ _ ^

~*~SweetyPieRin~*~

P.S. Thanks for reading my story! ^ _ ^

well, that story was funny and good overall. it was interesting and time seems to flash so fast ^-^ although i am not a inuyasha fan (really don't like it; i prefer ranma 1/2 more), it was a good fic. keep it up, ne~ and thanx for reading my fic.

Prince of Angst
ritachi

If I had any liquids in my stomach, I would have wet my pants laughing! HAHAH! O! I ended HAHAH with an 'H', all hail the might H! Ypu, I'm high on cough medicicine! Don't know if i spelled it right, but i am! heeheehoho, i gotta go! BOO!

hello! I kinda like your fanfic but it's a little...weird...how dare you make Kagome engaged to Naraku?! And why would InuYasha suddenly ask for marriage? It's just kinda weird...o...but it was kinda funny..."it was cool and all but if you don't stop, you're gonna die..." See ya! Hope you make another fic soon!

OF COURSE I'LL REVIEW YOUR STORIES! First of all thank you for taking the time to review mine. ^_^ Anyway this one-shot was cute! It went by kinda fast but thats to be expected (no ** raven2120 its caled a one-shot for a reason! (just mentally berating myself pay no attention!! ^_^ lol)) Its great! You're a good writer and you should write some more fanfics!! ^_^ I lurve sexy sesshy!(random thoughts)! *drools* Adios!

I took your advice and read your other story(obviously).
This is going into my favorites! I had to get up in the middle and go get popcorn and candy because, come on, you have to have popcorn and candy to read/watch any good story (and/or movie) Now I ask you a favor, try checking out my other stories, AND REVIEW!! They're comedy based so they should give you a good laugh. Phew! That's the longest review I've ever written!