It's good to see Alexander pleading with Hephaestion, wanting to make up to him for his most improper unfaithfulness. The story is filled with angst from the beginning, but then it is beautiful to see how they simply cannot do without one another and how they become complete together,

All the best wishes,

// NorthernLight

oh kinkey

Conquered by Hephaistion's thighs. XD Hee hee, this was cute. But I noticed that Hephaistion never said he loved Alexander. I liked that. Anyways, this was terribly cute. I dunno bout a second part though... *shrugs* What would you do? Other than bring up Roxanne. Oh, think of all the drama >:)

This was nice, angst and romance.
And anything fic with Alexander begging Heph forgiveness fills me with joy.
Looking forward to more fics from you.

Hm...this was a very good one-shot. I don't think it needs to be continued. Keep up the good writing.

Hugs,
Nihcole