Loved it

I love Usa and Ko!hahaha(

Usa is so cute and childish while Ko is so much like my friends cat!

Write more stories like this, they're so awesome!(((

YAY! Ko and Usa are back! they are joining diferently. Did this take place after Vivi left? That means Robin is either joining the crew or has already joined. I love this story! Update update update!

SWEET FIC! Anyway, if you're wondering, Luffy can use Ki in battle, but he does it in a different way. He calls it gear 2 and it allows him to release energy in order to unleash energy attacks.

Very nice story! I had to stop reading, but I made time to write you a review. Usa and Ko are very nice characters. You have a good humor and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm assuming that the next chapter their going to have to explain themselves. That should be interesting.

'Fish only smell bad cause their dead...'(my favorite line)And when Ko came in covered in yarn, you didn't have to figure out what guilty pleasure she was just indulging in. Is it just me or can Usa control her sister without her knowing it?

I like the animal behavior you've stuck in their. Like the fact Ko has a stash of cream and Usa is a vegetarian (can't imagine a rabbit eating meat .

What a brilliant way to introduce your OCs darlin' kitten. I see that mixing them with one piece characters can make things happen...crazy wiggin' things! keep up the good work love!

Your sentence structure was a little loose in this chapter. Sorry, it had to be said, especially considering the last line which says Ko is a genius who wants to be a pop idol. Do we really have to wait a year for the sequels? I really liked this story!

Alright! I can't wait for the final chapter! The DBZ thing was hilarious. I'm sad that the final chapter is next, but all good stories must come to an end. Maybe you'll make a sequel? Well anyway, I've enjoyed your writing and I think its pretty good in terms of structure and storytelling. Its also pretty funny. I hope you continue to write in the future.

I like Usa's new power and I hope we learn the cause of it. It seems like Ko really got left out in the power department, but at least her IQ stays at a steady level.(Plus there's that whole pocket space thing) Its great having a female Luffy on board. Good job.

I liked this chapter, too. Oh, and I finished the Alabasta story arc so I know who Robin is, now. Good portrayal of the Drunken Pirates. keep it up.

That mini-story was kind of interesting. Good history for the girls, I liked it, though their mothers seem pretty foolish. Well, that's love for you.

Good job. Sorry, but I can't stay to write more.

HaHA. Captain Obvious. That's absolutely perfect. I can't wait to see how Luffy and Usa get along. Oh, btw, I'm only at the Alabasta story arc in the mangas so far, so please tell me what Robin looks like and what she can do. I don't want any of her backstory, though.

Sincerely,

Angel of Atonement

That crazy coincidence is pure One Piece. I love it. The only thing odd is that every time Luffy has ever looked for a member they've always resisted him at first, but that's no big deal. The OC's are sool and I guess they ate Cursed Fruit which you'll explain later. I'll read the rest later, but good job.

lol another great chapter

sorry if my review's sux -_- I'm kinda in a rush right XP lol

Ja ne _

Blossom-chan

P.S: If you're wandering what 'Ja Ne' means, it's means 'bye'. o