great story.

Nice. The ending with the Force ghost gave me shivers. Love the Bant/Obi-Wan friendship, thanks for writing.

great story

You write the emotions of human loss very well. I can relate very well, having recently lost my father. It is a mind numbing event at first. Then you run a gauntlet of emotions. You captured it very believably. I hope you write some more Star Wars-it's all I'm into reading right now. Please?

That was truly touching. I'm a big fan of Bant/Obi fanfics and yours is one of the best ones I've seen!

that was great. I was in tears. Masterfully done.

that is so good! GOOD JOB!

That was brillient and soooooooooooo touching...one of the best things i've ever read!

This story is soooooo sad! I was acually crying as I sat in frong of the computer. I am so not kidding. What can I say? I'm sensitive! Great story.

I read it onlist before. This is terrific stuff. Sad, angsty. I remember I left the story with a heavy heart and eyes stinging with unshed tears. *sniffle* Please continue writing your beautiful tales...

I loved it. Idea, writing, dialouge. Writing a piece in the first person POV is so much harder than the third person. It's even harder to pull it off without giving in to temptation and making the cahracter omniscient. Yet you pulled it off very well. Not only was the story entertaining and believable, it was easy to read as well. A rare combination. One word of caution - watch your sentence structure. While the longer, richer phrases add depth and color, sometimes the placement of adjectives and adverbs interrupt the wonderful flow you've created. As for the story premise, it was both believable and surprising. I especially liked the ending. Keep writing, you definitely have a talent for it.

I relly liked the interactions between Obi-Wan and Bant. Your characterisation was really good, and I really liked the way you portrayed Obi-Wan's grie. Well done.

*grabs more tissues* that was so sweet. I suffered right along with Obi. Great job, keep writing. PJ