I love it! although, if you're looking for constructive critisism,I think you may have rushed a bit, ya know, as if you started writing down an idea but decided to make it a story too. Truely great story! Please write a sequil! ;D *adds to favs*

i likedc it. good job!

Nice story. Although I thought it was a bit rushed in the end. Good interaction between characters.

Very not bad!