Wow, this is really quite powerful. it starts off a little slow but once it gets into the race its really exciting.

Great idea as well, with Luke sort of getting caught up in the memories and the time of Anakins race. You juxtapose the two very nicely.

O. Scary.

Great one-shot. Very enjoyable to read, with good characterisation of all characters. I also liked how you had Obi-Wan come to the (mental) rescue; and of course nice Anakin flashes. lol. Yup, I'd recommand this to anyone who'd like to read a not too long, enjoyable, strong and well-writen story.

Excellent story! Great portrayal of young Luke: his Force-sensitivity, his subconcious awareness of his father, and how Ben keeps watch over him from afar. Great job!

an excellent story, can't wait read to read more.

Dang, that was good. It was almost as if I was right there. I salute you!

Wow... that was really something. Your writing style was smooth and easily read, your characterization was good, and the whole concept was very creative and well done.
The end could have been condensed a little more- it seemed to drag a bit after the climax. But apart from that, this story gets all my thumbs pointing upwards!

I liked this story very much! The idea is interesting and you are a good writer. Are you gonna write more to this or is it already complete?