Reviews for Land of the Sun

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Angelbreed2121 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abusewaahh! I can't wait for the next chapter!
demon-boy-chrono 2007-07-17 ch 7,	abuseYeah you fianly did it And that thing setsuka put on rosette's head is a bonett but yea you did it finally.
Moonlight Fire 2007-02-26 ch 6,	abuseYay! Even though I had an eye appointment today I finished the fic! Very good, by the way, but (forgive me if this is insulting or anything) you might want to get a spell check for your computer... Hehe! Chrono's such a perv and Rosette's... ...Evil. But still, I like it! Tho' it's pretty mature for me...
shadowstar 2006-05-16 ch 6, anon.	abuseWoa!! Rosette's sister knows how to get what she want of everyone for sure! I have a lot of fun reading this fic (it likes me more than your other one) but I not too keen in japanese, so I miss some stuff here. I hope to read more of this soon. By!
ChrnoCreations 2006-04-24 ch 6,	abusealot of good laughs and a truley enjoyable story plz update soon i cant wait for the next installment
ChrnoCreations 2006-04-24 ch 3,	abuseAion is so mean for blaming the cat he should be a man and take responability (that will be the day hell freezes over^^) Woot this rox i cant wait to read more but the little review button was begging to be pressed ^^
raspberrysorbet 2006-03-22 ch 6,	abuseRemington and Elder are SO perved...go on!
Prinder 2006-03-22 ch 6,	abuseOkay, I've read all of the stories you guys have written, thus far, and this one is the one I like the best. That said, I've noticed that you have some small spelling problems that seem to keep reoccuring in almost every one of your fics. Nothing really bad, just small mistakes that, while they may not have been caught by the spell-checker, tend to draw away crowds when reading. Examples to watch out for: Make, not Mack (which is a slang term for a person "Oi, Mack!" or a name). Want (as in, I want something) or Won't (as in, I won't do that), not Wont. For (as in, this is for you) or Four (as in, there are four of us), not Fore (which is for things like forehead, or forethought or foreboding-- It means "before"). Due (the rent is Due), not Deu ("Without further Adeu." --Delay). Bus, not buss. Capitalize "jap." Angel (has wings), not angle (has corners-- like a triangle). Minute, not minuet (minuet is a dance movement). Peeled, not pealed. Clothes, not cloths (cloths are scraps of fabric-- personally, I use "cloths" for dishrags, as in, washcloths). Jake, not Jack (in this case, while both are spelled correctly, you want Jake, as it is the proper 1920s slang term). I'll be keeping watch of other typos as the stories go on. It's not that I'm picking on you, it's just that part of writing is improving your skills as writers. You guys have wonderful ideas, and I just think it is a shame that people may be missing out on enjoying them because of a few small mistakes.
Yuffie_3 2006-03-21 ch 6, anon.	abuseYou have a very good story and I want to see more of it, very soon if it is possible.
Shiotashi 2006-03-15 ch 1,	abusewow this is really good update!^^
raspberrysorbet 2006-03-10 ch 4,	abuseMisoGirl.Let me just ask you one question.WHY DO YOU LIKE ROSETTE TO BE RAPED IN YOUR STORIES?In that story about the mansion too you let her get raped.Now,you let her get raped too.Why can't you just have a simple fluffy fic?You make the stories heartbroken...
Black Chaos and Light Catas... 2006-03-09 ch 5,	abuseUpdate Update Update...Your story is so good! C'mon update! ^_^
Black Chaos and Light Catas... 2005-12-24 ch 4,	abuseI loved it! You better update soon Cause you left me with a cliffy! And I hate Cliffys!! Big Hot Chrono is back Im happy!! By the way why did Chrono and Rosette run away from you? I like the story...I hope they are alright... I love it so hurry and update before I grow old!!
Lycara 2005-12-24 ch 4,	abuseo...>_> Me like, me like... Hurry hurry with the next one! Well after Christmas that is...When you get the chance to write it. (few spelling errors I must say but AWESOME!) anyways.. Update soon! Till your next update/chapter Sayonara! (Happy holidays to you!)
Black Chaos and Light Catas... 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat story thus far keep it up! I have a question...Is Chrono ever gonna turn big again!?? I hope so he is hot then and I want to read Rosette's response to it! Hehehehe..

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