Interesting story and twist on how events played out. Really interested in how you would continue to develop this story.
I hope you decide to continue this story.

Hopefully at the next one.

well done

cant wait for more

This is a excellent story.

Hm, I like it. It's got a good flow to it.

Update soon!

D00b out.

UPDATE, great storie

this seems like it is going to be a realy good story. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

GASP!

aww, damn! more! love it! but do you think you could give me some tips on a fight scene for my story?

sweet story,

update soon

Cool!

About good... but why hasn't Gohan asked Bulma for a gravity room yet? Some 100g training should be ready to push Gohan and Goku toward Super Saiyan levels. I would think that's the first thing he'd do.

If i had to guess i'd say Kui, Dodoria, Zarbon, and a henchman are the ones coming to attack earth. I do hope you post power level charts for the fights in the next chapter too. Anyway keep up the good work.

good more!

i loved this new part! Write more! will gohan explain exactly WHO he is, or should i say, 'the truth about his mental age and memory' at one point? And if he does, WHO will be the culprit of his confession? (my bet would be on bulma: she's clever, therefore he has a chance to manage to convince her using his academical knowledge...)