I love this story! It is a bitter sweet love and I hope that you see fit to continute it. I love the way you write it as if it were a play. You probably would have laughed if you saw me while reading this sroty. I read it out loud for that is the way plays are meant to be obsorbed. They are to be seen and heard not read so I acted this all out and made it real within my room. Thank you for writing such a wonderul story. And if you see fit please update soon! ;p

That was beautiful. the words flowed so well. and the mood was so incredible. it is also very original. the end was very bittersweet. normally i stay away from that. i follow the reading is to forget sadness rule. but i still love this.