wow
you need to write more
good plot twists
and let me know your meaning of BBC to let me know
('cause I'm not familier with that particular code even though many others I do undersand)

can you say ew Nevile is horrid

I really liked this story. It had a ver yfunny first chapter and a more descriptive second chapter that had more romantic aspects to it. I love the couples that you've created and i cant wait until you put up the third chapter! Blaise & Ginny (

this is a really good story i love your plot line and your an amazing writer, i actually started laughing my ** off outloud haha perfect couples and tension! keep writing!

after i read this i woke up with my own wet dreams smothered in my boxers, crustated, clinging to my pubic hair and legs.
i cant fathom how you come up with these intense "webs" of attraction
keep writing and i'll keep my maturbation levels raging like your hormones

This was very funny! You should put it under the humor category, it belongs there. I actually laughed out loud in numerous parts. Your writing is pretty good... however, there were some person errors; I wasn't sure if it was first person and who the narrator was, especially since it seemed to switch to third person in the end. Your grammatical errors aside, I think you are a very descriptive and interesting writer. Can't wait for the second chapter!

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Taylor