Now that was creepy.

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(shudder!)

got goosebumps from reading this. great short story.

I just love it! The evil dark Snape manipulating events to his wishes! Well done!

Wow. This was absolutely diablolical! I can just picture Severus the slimy Slytherin doing this too. Very well written. Tragic and ironic.

I think it would take more than killing off Harry but cute (if nasty) fic.

very, very good one-shot. I love to read stories with sneaky Snape !

My fault, eh? I also said you could send Harry to the Caribbean.

But I do so like a creepy, conniving Snape. Nice job.

Outstanding piece. You really got the character's.

Wow I liked it ^__^

Dare I say it? I loved it!

this is marvelous..i hope she never does find out!

Dude. Awesome.

That translates into:
i have no words to explain how profound this piece was. you indeed have great talent and if you quit writing anything, i shall be forced to harm you.

it was just that good.

Very well done even without a beta's touch. I agree the SS/HG is now only possible with Harry out of the picture. Sadly I'm still betting my paycheck that neither Snape nor Harry survive the end of Book 7.

And what other 'less than forgiving achives' will you be posting to?

Now, isn't this a nasty little fic, LOL. Devious!Ruthless!Snape - wonder whom he learned the master-manipulator-bit from - Voldemort or Dumbledore...

"“I killed him,” she whispered.
“What? What do you mean?” He was bewildered."

Well, yes, that would throw him for a bit of a loop, wouldn't it? :-)