Reviews for Hot Chocolate - FanFiction.Net

piratesswriter 2006-03-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is so cute! I love N/L one-shots... I don't know why... so cute!
Jennifer 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was cute. But I think maybe a little more could have happened, it ended up ending too quickly. But I love how you wrote Luna, totally in character. But all those "Bloody Hell"s were a bit unlike Neville. But besides that I think this fic is wponderful. ~Jen
Lizzy Weasley 2005-11-21 ch 1,	abuseReally cute, I like it! Lizzy
geniusgirl 2005-11-12 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was so cute! And you didn't write Luna out of character, which was brilliant because I hate it when writers do that. ;)
Bagge 2005-11-08 ch 1,	abuseSweet. You wrote Luna perfectly. Nonflustered, honest, helpful dreamy and distant. Neville was looking only for help and maybe acess to his own bed, but he found himself a midnight chocholate date instead. Good on him.
Leah [starstruck__x] 2005-11-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really liked this little ficlet. It was very sweet and yet avoiding the cliche fluff. Besides, Luna/Neville are a really well suited couple that I hardly ever see. You really kept to the canon personalitied aswell. Great work!