 piratesswriter 2006-03-07 . chapter 1This is so cute! I love N/L one-shots... I don't know why... so cute! |
 Jennifer 2005-11-22 . chapter 1 That was cute. But I think maybe a little more could have happened, it ended up ending too quickly. But I love how you wrote Luna, totally in character. But all those "Bloody Hell"s were a bit unlike Neville. But besides that I think this fic is wponderful.
~Jen |
 Lizzy Weasley 2005-11-21 . chapter 1Really cute, I like it!
Lizzy |
 geniusgirl 2005-11-12 . chapter 1Aw, that was so cute! And you didn't write Luna out of character, which was brilliant because I hate it when writers do that. ;) |
 Bagge 2005-11-08 . chapter 1Sweet. You wrote Luna perfectly. Nonflustered, honest, helpful dreamy and distant. Neville was looking only for help and maybe acess to his own bed, but he found himself a midnight chocholate date instead. Good on him. |
 Leah [starstruck__x] 2005-11-06 . chapter 1 I really liked this little ficlet. It was very sweet and yet avoiding the cliche fluff. Besides, Luna/Neville are a really well suited couple that I hardly ever see. You really kept to the canon personalitied aswell. Great work! |