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Reviews for: Hot Chocolate
piratesswriter
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
This is so cute! I love N/L one-shots... I don't know why... so cute!
Jennifer
2005-11-22 . chapter 1
That was cute. But I think maybe a little more could have happened, it ended up ending too quickly. But I love how you wrote Luna, totally in character. But all those "Bloody Hell"s were a bit unlike Neville. But besides that I think this fic is wponderful.
~Jen
Lizzy Weasley
2005-11-21 . chapter 1
Really cute, I like it!
Lizzy
geniusgirl
2005-11-12 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so cute! And you didn't write Luna out of character, which was brilliant because I hate it when writers do that. ;)
Bagge
2005-11-08 . chapter 1
Sweet. You wrote Luna perfectly. Nonflustered, honest, helpful dreamy and distant. Neville was looking only for help and maybe acess to his own bed, but he found himself a midnight chocholate date instead. Good on him.
Leah [starstruck__x]
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this little ficlet. It was very sweet and yet avoiding the cliche fluff. Besides, Luna/Neville are a really well suited couple that I hardly ever see. You really kept to the canon personalitied aswell. Great work!
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