So very,very sweet.

This fanfic touched me deeper than the others I've read thus far and so this review won't be in the form of short sentences or single words. Probably because I can relate. I'm about just as terrible with spoken words, well, words from the heart anyway. By the time I finished reading this, I had a bittersweet smile playing on my lips.

It'd be ideal if every relationship could work without having to say how one felt (in my case anyway). I think you pulled it off extremely well, writing this that is. I can imagine this very story taking place in my mind. The little smiles, the unusually weakened Fuji, and Ryoma doing simple things like handing Fuji a book, bringing him a glass of water or simply just sitting there watching the senior. Good job.

I look forward to reading more of your TeniPuri fanfiction.

Good job showing how they care about each other! I also like how you described that words aren't always enough. That is true: "actions speak louder than words." At times, I myself just hate explaining things, so I can understand the characters.

liked it.

First, thank you for your replies. )

Second, this is another beautiful fanfic. Congrats.

Third, (forgive me if this may seem rude) can I please have a copy of Futari's lyrics in english? Because I do so agree. Minagawa-san's or Ryoma's voice is every addicting. And from what I have read, I am sure the translation would likely be very meaningful. But if I cannot, then it's all right. Still, thank you.

Ja.

liked it!

Yes, Minagawa Junko's voice is VERY addicting! I listen to it everyday. And this is very sweet, and very much like how I picture their relationship going. Who needs words when you're a tensai and a child prodigy?

I think I'm already quite aware of Minagawa Junko's voice being such an obsession...Oh come on! I've had LSS on Dreaming on the Radio for two weeks now! Gah! Anyhow, as much as I might want to rant long statements on how good written this is with its plot, I don't think I have much time. Although I'm asking if you're going to have a sequel to your "Rain Falls". I'm finding that quite interesting. I really want to know if they're ending up together...ya know? I mean, sure buchou's there to help but I think he'd like the tensai more, ne? Hehe...well, I've got to be off then! Ja, mata ne!

Milky Etoile .

CHALLENGE: WRITE A FANFIC (rYOMA X FUJI OF COURSE!) HOWEVER I THINK U SHOULD DEFINITELY MAKE RYOMA THE SEME THIS TYM...I MEAN I THINK THE FUJI SHOULD BE DOMINATED FOR ONCE.. I DON'T THINK RYOMA IS THE TYPE OF PERSON WHO'LL LET ANYONE MAKE HIM A PUSH OVER...HE IS VERY COMPETITIVE SO.. I DON'T THINK HE'LL WANT TO BE AT THE BOTTOM...HE IS THE PRINCE OF TENNIS WHO WANTS TO BE ON TOP...AT TENNIS OR IN BED FOR ONCE DON'T CHA THINk SO? I MEAN FUJI IS A BISHOUNEN SO HE'LL FIT THE PART AS THE UKE...HE IS VERY DOMINANT BUT HAVING A STORY THAT SHOWS THAT HE ISN'T ALWAYS AT THE TOP OR I N CONTROL IS INTRIGUING! DIFFERENT FROM DA OTHER FICS I'VE READ...I MEAN FUJI'S PRETTY!.WELL...THAT'S WHAT I THINK...IF YOU'RE UP FOR IT...email me at DARE YA!

I agree...Minagawa's voice has become an obsession...good fanfic...really lovely...

Ah, a different style in writing POT ne? But it's okay for me. Make you or us the reader kinda involved in this story, like we are beside them. Not just like an observer out there. You know, I think it's really sweet the way Ryouma took care of Fuji. And I definetly like the way Fuji's fear/doubt about Ryouma never says the words changed into an understatement that sometimes words just ain't enough.

aw so kawaii

I loved it P

SO CUTE! I loved it!