Sugoi o_O ... you really ARE good at writing convincing romance stories. Excellent job keeping them in character. It's nice that you've touched on the subject of a person's part being an integral part of how they tend to act. I'm not really a fan of shounen-ai, but I'd really like to see where this story is heading - I hope it stays on track as a kind of mental exercise and doesn't degrade into an overly fluffy/emotional piece. Keep writing!

*blurrble of glee*

I love osamu and ryo fanfics *sigh* but you never see alot of them, but the few are usualy good, this one would be one of them! most people put ryo or osamu ooc (without meaning to) in there fics

I have also read "phantom codewalker" and am currently reading through the rest of the series. ^^

on that note, I am off to read more fanfics!

PS. please update as soon as you can!