 Imayame21 2009-08-16 . chapter 4Please tell me you'll update! I love it so much! |
 Animelover6000 2007-07-18 . chapter 4well now that i have read the sequel it has answered my question. well anyways i kinda feel bad for akito. i mean really really bad. but update soon. and i didnt really like akito at first but now that i do i dont want you to kill him...so dont let him die ok... |
 loritakitochan 2007-03-17 . chapter 4great story!please update! |
 realms of fic 2007-02-14 . chapter 4I love this fic so much. You have no idea. I guess it's the best fic in the whole fandom. Your portrayal of Akito's madness is awesome and so very intriguing. I've never seen anything like this story. And it's your best fic too. I'm so sorry you haven't updated it for so long. But I keep hoping. What else can I do? :) |
 GreenBinderGirl 2007-01-11 . chapter 4Wow, this is the perfect story to read right before bed, ne? XD |
 firefly12 2006-12-31 . chapter 4 I feel REALLY bad for Hatori. Aki needs a hug. Your fic is great! ^^ Hatori has called the men in white coats.
They're coming to take me away HA HA
They're coming to take me away HO HO
HEE HEE HA HA
To the Funny Farm, where life is beautiful all the time
And I'll be happy to see those nice young men
In their clean white coats
And they're coming to take me away HA HA
They're coming to take me away HA HA
They're coming to take me away HO HO
HEE HEE HA HA
To the Happy Home, with flowers and trees and chirping birds
And basket weavers who sit and smile and
Twiddle their thumbs and toes
And they're coming to take me away HA HA!
'The Funny Farm' by Dr. Demento |
 Michele 2006-08-24 . chapter 4 PLEASE UPDATE THIS! It's so good, I love your writing style and I love, love, love your Hatori. And your Akito, for that matter :} |
 Vince from Shamwow 2006-08-20 . chapter 4this is the best. please update. |
 SunMoonAndSpoon 2006-08-01 . chapter 4Spooky ending! A specialist...is he going to wind up terribly injured like that doctor in your other fic? I can't wait to see how that turns out, however long it takes it should be really interesting. Anyway this was...great, as I said. I didn't expect anything less, but it was. The 'going crackers' thing is hilarious, I've always thought of that as a British phrase, is that American? I don't know, I don't watch sitcoms. Anyway it was funny. Lets see. I already said I liked the part where he was watching TV. My two favorite things in writing are the mundane and the disgusting (as you may have noticed) and you're a good supplier of both! Also, I really liked the way you descrbied the curse. It was the most concise explanation I've ever heard. Lovely job all in all, can't wait for more! ^^ I don't break for paragraphs no how! |
 Hatori Soma 2006-07-22 . chapter 4 this is cute for a ha'ri Akito fic. Keep going and e-mail me when you update! |
 NovoCained 2006-07-10 . chapter 4Ah, finally!
It's good, but I thought he'd gotten teleported back in time or something. Interesting theory about Akito and all that life force coming from him. Uh, her?
But keep goin~! |
 Liz 2006-07-07 . chapter 4 This story is amazing. You write so well. But it's making me sad... I dreamed a horrible dream the other night, about Yuki dying. And when I woke up, even after I read the last issue of the manga and watched episodes of the anime where he was alive and well, I just couldn't believe he wasn't dead. I started to write a fanfic about it and had to stop. This story is the same way...that same unbearable sadness. I have the feeling that something tragic is going to occur. Please don't let the ending be too sad! I know it's just a story--maybe it's because you write so wonderfully, that it feels like so much more.
One thing I have noticed that is unique to this fic: You seem to truly understand Akito. The first chapter especially impressed me. His insanity and his physical illness were expressed so vividly and beautifully. I especially liked the idea that all the Juuyinishi were feeding off of his life-energy. It made total sense. It was like discovering the truth that I'd sought for so long, but it was right in front of me. Do you mind if I adopt that explanation of his illness in my fics? I'd give you credit, of course.
I like how you're expressing the guilt that he feels in his subconscious mind. And I like the relationship between him and Hatori--it's not too graphic, but it's sweet and it still retains the manner in which a doctor treats his patient. When Akito called Shigure, "Bad dog," it made me laugh. Not just because it was so clever, although it was, but also because I had the exact same thing happen in one of my fanfictions that I haven't posted yet (although I didn't explain the psychological effect it had on Shigure as well as you did). It just goes to show that great minds really do think alike!
One thing that is really on my heart after reading this fic: Could you please give Akito a chance to apologize to the real Yuki? It's just so sad that he's having hallucinations of Little Yuki and feeling guilty about what he's "going to do to him," and that he's lying around wishing for him. And the real Yuki has no idea how Akito is feeling! He probably just thinks that Akito was amused when he abused him, and that he feels no regret. It would be horrible if Akito died or was locked up in an asylum without ever getting to tell Yuki how he really feels about what happened.
Lastly, I have to wonder: Does Akito's family really have the power to put him away? It seems to me like they'd be breaking their contract with him if they tried to do that against his will. And I can't imagine that he would ever allow that. I think that he is so dependant on his family that he would have a complete mental breakdown or just die of grief if he was ever seperated from them like that. For psychological reasons too, besides the whole blood-bond deal.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter (but please don't break my heart! I love Akito so much! ^_^). And I'm adding you to my favorite authors list! If you want, you can check out the stories I have posted--my screenname is Akito Souma--I don't have any of my best works up yet, but hopefully there is something there to amuse you. Good luck in your future writing!
~Liz |
 Suiryoka 2006-07-06 . chapter 4Man, I'm speechless. Poor Akito! This fic keeps getting better and better, though! I can't wait until the next chapter! Good chapter. :) |
 SolitaireAikanaro 2006-05-24 . chapter 3NOO!! Aw...this makes me so sad...and the ending was so sweet! It would be really lovely and dark if there was a sad ending for Akito...but I want him to be happy!! ARGH! Conflicting emotions...
Oh yeah! Update Sinful Love... -stare- And did you get my email in reply? |
 criaya 2006-05-09 . chapter 3 I really enjoy your story, it's intreging and one of those storys you can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. I have watched the anime I even own the box set but I mainly read it so I think of Akito as a boy and I don't like boyxboy but it's good to see Akito has someone to lean on he would be my favorite character if he didn't hurt Yuki. Anyway... AWESOME FIC!! |