 Amarin Rose 7/2/05 . chapter 1A thought-provoking combination of 'What if?' and 'There, but for the grace of God, go I.'
Very nicely done. :) |
 Seamus 4/30/01 . chapter 1 Neat. Concise. No inaccuracies. |
 YES 4/29/01 . chapter 1 This is one of the best character pieces I've seen on Barbara. You've allowed the Batgirl version to be rather naive and thoughtless (really, she seems to have learned nothing from the ordeal with her father), and the Oracle version to be bitter. This isn't a flattering fanboy portrait, but it is achingly real and right. Babs hasn't been written this well in years. |
 John Westcott 4/26/01 . chapter 1Okay, that was MOST chilling, indeed. Very spooky and thought provoking and extremely well written. The best part is Barbara's statement about how Bruce already blames himself, great insight. :) |
 Kerjen 4/25/01 . chapter 1 Oh, this was excellent. I've never read a better story with more insight into all the layers of Barbara Gordon. |
 Chastity 4/24/01 . chapter 1Brrrr, 'rith. Just... brrr. Very powerfully written. I feel for Babs - both of her. |