|Reviews for The War Within|
| Wolfman16 12/17/06 . chapter 3
This story sounds a lot like the game Shattered Union, and it takes place at the sametime the game does... I like that game, good job
| CAmn Brenkus 9/15/06 . chapter 10
Good stuff "Sgt. Bob". Add some more or I shall cry
| joebthegreat 7/27/06 . chapter 10
Boom... explosions are fun!
Good story... good job... good night...
Is this still here? oops...
*is about to click submit but falls asleep*
sorry... but this is a good story...
| ME 7/7/06 . chapter 1
hello. reviewing is fun.
I haven't actually read this yet, but I know you're a good writer.
| MedicWolfram 6/26/06 . chapter 9
Hey, just read all teh chapters, and wow I am really enjoying the cliffhangers, please update soon i cant wait.
| TyneBytes 4/6/06 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD! i don't believe you actually read that! *blush* what can i say i AM a slash writer. I'm glad you liked it! yes, my new name was given to me by the wonderful forensics freshman. just read the first chapter, looks pretty sweet. gah, i'm supposed to be on Hey!Math so i gotta go. se ya tomorrow.
| joebthegreat 1/13/06 . chapter 9
I think the kid should die in a strange twist of fate and then in a DBZ style he should come back to life...
then he can die 26 more times in this story!
but seriously... it was cool... but that gun... since when did a bunch of rag-tag resistance peeps get a gun like that?
| marcus 1/9/06 . chapter 9
Good battle,... so far. Interesting ending,will the next chapter be up?...
| joebthegreat 12/23/05 . chapter 8
IT WAS TOTALLY THE BEST CHAPTER YOU EVER DID!
yea... ok then... very interesting... I cant wait for the next chapter... (actually I can... but that wouldnt sound all that great)
| the templar of the states 12/23/05 . chapter 8
describe the enemies, i'm workin on my chapter and i need sum help, so small suggestions could help. o, i got sum suggestions for you. i play viedo games, alot of video games. and mainly i play, BF2 (battlefield) and sum of the missions ive played have influenced my stories. (the whole jumpin out of a window thing)
THE TEMPLAR OF THE STATES (gabe)
| MyLastStand 12/20/05 . chapter 7
Hey. Awesome story. I'm a big fan of Freedom Fighters. I thought you described the fights really well. The dialogue could use a little work & you don't describe some of the areas enough but other than that you're doing a kick ass job. It'd be pretty sweet if you made the next chapter about a mission that was something along the lines of a large ambush using the vehicles the Resistance captured & the TA-33. But you're the author, do what you want.
| joebthegreat 12/17/05 . chapter 7
you didnt like Agent Smith from the Matrix! OMFG I HOPE YOUR CHILDREN SWARM YOU ONE DAY AND EAT YOU!11
cool... can you like... make him a retard now?
| THE TEMPLAR OF THE STATES 12/16/05 . chapter 7
Ok, man lemme elaborate on somthing for you. Thanks for the review, Ameriacan hummers don't have 3 barreled machine guns on top, sorry, but its true, it only has a single barreld 50. calibre machine gun/cannon. Trust me I'm and army buff. I need a few suggestions, so if you could drop me another e-mail, that'd be great. your help would be greatly appreiciated.
The TEMPLAR OF THE STATES(gabe)
| Marcus 12/16/05 . chapter 7
AWESOME, cool ending to the fight but geez you turned a tower into splinters wow. Cant wait for the next chapter.
| Marcus 12/11/05 . chapter 6
Awesome fight but you should say magazine instead of clip. And how about this for an idea Vietnam boats.