OH, I really like this! I think you have easily become my favorite Big O writer! The story was entertaining and beautifully written. And the ending was so surprising! I never would have imagined... Dorothy truly is amazing! You kept everyone wonderfully in-character and showed the love between Dorothy and .Roger without making it disgustingly sappy, which wouldn't have fit with them. I loved this and truly liked it much better then the anime. I could actually see it happening and it would have made a better explanation then what anime/manga came up with. Great job!

Duchess

I really like this! My favorite line in this chapter is "And so an android felt what it was like to die." That line said so much just by you using the word 'felt'. It begs the question; even in a memory - a memory not truly of her own - would she be able to feel? I can't wait to see where you're taking this!

Duchess

Aw. No sappy kisses or confessions but I feel like it stayed true to the canonical story.

If only there's a season 3 for Big O _

Unfortunately, that won't happen now.

Marvelous story, I really enjoyed reading this one.

Thanks for writing it )

And I hope you write more RogerxDorothy stories in the future.

Though you probably had already lost interest xD

What a cliffy!

I'm gonna die from a heart attack _

Interesting idea as to where R-D came from.

I'm not liking the Human Dorothy _

Geez, who would want their lover to die with them, for them?

What kind of a promise is that? How selfish.

OMG o_e;

I cannot stand Angel.

I honestly think that the series would've been a lot better if she did not exist.

Interesting, wah, can't wait to read more!

*Dashes to read the next chappie while waving a RogerxDorothy flag* xD

This was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it.

-Ahria

Pretty good story so far!

Im almost speechless in awe! That was nothing like i expected it to be, it was just an artful masterpiece. The mystery and intrigue was just so alluring i couldn't stop reading if only to try to understand the gaps in the plot. Whats more is that the characters were well done, i could believe that it was just another episode of the actual show! You have to continue this, i need to know what happens next!

i think u explained it better than the two season of Big O did, and boy have i seenthose eps time and again. thank you and great story.

i loved this story i think it's the best big o story i've read in a while can you make another big o story that would be very pleasent

you may not even read this was an incredibly well constructed story and I ahve enjoyed it immensly. Thanks for all the hard work!

C

That was fantastic, I'd been entertaining some theories of my own about Roger's memories and the nature of the being he is.

This was beautifully written, very human (which always helps!), very in keeping with the characters (I can't stand OOC Roger and Dorothy), and very intelligent.

I hope you find the time and interest to write more stories like this.