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Flowing Tears
2008-05-09
ch 14,
abuseI think this is the best story I have ever read on , though I hope I'll find more great work. For the 5th time did I read this, and I still giggle, laugh, rofl and get tears in my eyes when I read this. I learned so much from this and will probably learn even more when I'll read this a 6th time. Thanks to this story I was able to teach my cousin about yaoi, and that not all yaoi is about the lemon in chapter 5.

This is truly a masterpiece.
disconnected15
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseSeriously, this is one amazing piece of work.
Now, I'm all confused if I'm really a RayxTala or RayxKai. *sigh* Though I am a bit depressed that Ray and Lee didn't get to sort things out properly in the end... but it's not everyday that you find out that the 'guy' you've been hanging out with is gay... I wished Lee tried to understand though... seeing as he's Ray's 'best friend' and all. Meh. And now I'm just babbling. Sorry about that.

Awesome work! (and now I'm going off to read the sequel... heehee)*thumbs up*

And did I mention I love Brooklyn and Hiro in this? ^^
KaiFan4Ever
2008-04-27
ch 13,
abuseI want an Angora Rabbit now too. I will name it ... That.
haxah
2007-11-11
ch 14, anon.
abuseYou're mean!
I've read this in the middle of the night and wasn't allowed to make noise and wake my family up... I nearly died becouse I had to bite my pillow so I wouldn't burst out laughter and so I couldn't breeze...

wonderful story, I'm really impressed!
Chibi Bishi
2007-11-07
ch 14,
abuseDAW!! ITS SO CUTE!! i wuv this couple=]
Akina.Strange
2007-08-11
ch 14,
abuseIf I got paid 1 penny for every time I laughed, for every time I shouted at my computer, everytime I cried, everytime I wanted to beat up mariah, and everytime I shouted "Zhopa" just because Tala said it...I would have more money then the world could produce in my whole life span.

Im even crying as I type this.
The whole time I was like "There is no hope Rei! JUST BURN WOODY NOW!"

I just...whoa. If I could kiss you. I would. But I cant. =] Cause this is only a review...with text. You are an AMAZING writer, far better then most published authors I have read.
I love your other fanfictions too.
But this... is just...Oh my flying goldfish.
You left me on the edge of my seat from 11:30 AM to 5:15 AM.
I love this story.
-Moonlight-102
2007-08-06
ch 14,
abusehi, great story ! want more! XD
Broken Vows
2007-07-01
ch 14,
abuseI must say...
That was absoultely...
I can't...

It was so...

Gah... words cannot describe.
I adored it beyond belief.
You are so talented, this was so perfect and so...
The comedy was hilarious, I haven't laughed at a fanfiction this much ever.
The angst and tragedy was beutiful and threatened to be a tear jerker.
The ending?
... I cannot describe my happiness towards the ending. The whole fight thing made me want to stab someone in the neck with a steak knife (Prefferably Mariah or Lee)
...
...and I really want a Rabbit. So cute.
Your characterization made me giggle in glee.
... your setting made me wish that it wasn't July, and that Xmas was just THAT much closer...

I hear there's a sequel, and as soon as I finish the jobs I have procrastinated on while reading this, I will read it, and I fully intend to enjoy it.

Thank you SO much for this gem, It's people like you who I inspire to be.

Always,
Rio
SteelMagnolia
2007-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseI for one LOVED Ray's inner thoughts. They're hilarious! And there are over 700 reviews here that agree with me on that so the last reviewer is just being a cynic.

Funny, witty, creative and just awesome: this story ROCKS! Then again, this is you, Miss Ladya, we're talking about here so why am I not surprised XP Heck, I'm addicted to your Kingdom Hearts fics and I don't have a clue what the hell it even is!!

So yeah, keep on writing girl! Am looking forward to the next update for 10 Miles In 10 Seconds, with Ray's tirades and all!
ann
2007-06-20
ch 2, anon.
abuseRay's inner monologue is INCREDIBLY annoying. Can his brain shut up for 5 minutes? Maybe then we can actually get a plot going.
Kaiiko
2007-02-12
ch 14,
abusethat story is so great:D I love it
J.J. Banks
2007-02-08
ch 13, anon.
abuseHuh. This is my second time through (yes, I read stories I especially love over again... many times) and I finally caught the 'Sinners' insert. Clever, my friend, very clever.

I obviously also don't spend much time reading author notes.

Update 10 and Sinners, please.
Kaiiko
2007-02-07
ch 2,
abuseAw...sweet. ^^ And this view of Kai running wet in rain :)
Kaiiko
2007-02-07
ch 1,
abuse:D:D I couldn't stop laughting with teers iny my eyes when I read this Rei's "intelligent" question about Drigger ^^
And the whole chapter was so funny:d I love the way of Rei's thinkign it's so great to read:D
ShockMePeter
2006-11-26
ch 14, anon.
abuseOhgosh, first I just love your sense of humour. And I must say you're a very talented writer!
My heart really sank as I thought this story incapable of ending happily, but you proved me wrong big time.
And that brings a smile to my lips.
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