Shiny! I'm a latecomer to your story, but I really enjoyed it. In particular, you did the "voices" of the characters-especially Wash and Zoe and Jayne-really well. Thanks for such a delightful, Kaylee-esque wedding!

To one browncoat to another:

I love what you've done with your story. I love the ending...

And yes, I could see it all perfectly!

he had half a mind to wave back and tell them to that Simon and River was his kin now and they ain’t to be talkin’ to them, ever.

Damn. I just fell in love with the captain ALL OVER AGAIN.

“Hi. Wash, best man.”

Hahaha, you have Mal, Jayne, and Wash perfectly in character.

Aw, yeah Simon is a traditionalist.

An excellent story, but I've noticed that you haven't updated it in a while... Please do, the flow, plot, and characterizations were all excellent. Do this for all of us, as a "Favor" :)

I realize it's been a while since you've updated this, but it's such a great story, I really hope you finish it! :)

So cute! I love it, more please! :)

bah, you're supposed to update, you know. lol please? see, I'm not being so demanding that I can;t be nice O:-)

YAY FOR FIXIN' JOSS' IDIOCY! GO YOU! Sorry for the outburst, but for putting Wash and Book back the way they should be. That's the only thing I hated 'bout that movie. I like your 'verse better. Oh, and the story is awsome, i love it. Please post more soon!

Oh, this is a great story! I hope you're planning on finishing it.

Just what DID Mal and Wash say to Simon's family? I love that you've included them in this story.

Can't wait to see what next you have in store!

Awesome story! Please post more soon :)

Please Please please say you havent abandoned this! This fantastic and so very sweet. I would love to see where you are going to go with Simon and River's mother and Kaylee's brother. Well Done.

Aw, that was so sweet.

I can't wait to see what Kaylee's brother's do to Simon!