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Rose of Hope
2008-06-23
ch 11,
abuseI honestly love all of your stories and I regret the fact that this was the last installment. It makes me wish that the DC Batman went along with your story-line. It was bloody-brilliant. I love it. Keep it up!

Deu sa
MzDany
2006-01-15
ch 11,
abuseCongratulations on an excellent story! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Great job, Camille!
I was wondering whether Bruce would take the antidote or decide to tough it out.
It's good to see Dick and Bruce resuming their old partnership and Dick deciding to stay. Wanderlust can only go so long...
It would have been interesting to see an 'afterwards' conversation between Dick and Barbara, but we can always let imagination work on that.
Nice little touch with the Robin on the tree :)
And yes, you've definitely improved upon the Starman outfit :)
Again, great work from you. You really are a wonderful writer.
Greetings from Dany
robster72
2006-01-15
ch 11,
abuseI do like the way Bruce wants to try out life without the antidote, since he seemed to control it. That seems to fit in to his character. It's nice to see Bruce's character change throughout this story in a subtle but believable way as well. I hope you write some more Batfics someday!
Dagmar Buse
2006-01-14
ch 11,
abuseAww. *pouts* I don't WANT this to be over!

Good conclusion, though; very well handled with insights on both sides. Nice work!
DC Lady
2006-01-14
ch 11,
abuseAn excellent ending to a truly excellent story. I do hope you continue writing 'Bat' related fic even though this particular series has ended.

Paula
robster72
2006-01-10
ch 10,
abuseGreat chapter! I love the ending where he finally confronts his fear. Good believable dialogue between all the characters as well and a nice way of showing Batgirls first encounter with some thugs... I look forward to the next chapter!
MzDany
2006-01-10
ch 10,
abusevery nice and intense chapter! You did a great job with the description of the apartment building and especially the fight scenes (btw. 'un-dined-on' sounds just like a word I would use *grin*)
The dialogues were excellent and witty, as always. Love Catwoman's many bat-jabs! (I now picture a bloodhound dressed in a cowl and cape as the perfect pet for Bruce)
Nice twist with Barbara and Dick ultimately revealing their identities to each other. I wonder how that will change their relationship now...
And excellent job on Star/Batman's struggle to overcome his phobia in the presence of the Scarecrow. You've shown him beat almost overwhelming odds while at the same time kept him 'human' enough to know that he hadn't beaten it completely yet.
Great read!
Dany
Dagmar Buse
2006-01-08
ch 10,
abuseVery good! Love it! (And sorry, out of time ...)
robster72
2006-01-03
ch 9,
abuseGood to see Batwoman turning up at the end! Nicely done conversation about Batman's fear as well, it sounds very realistic, like the survivorship syndrome stuff. I look forward to the next chapter!
robster72
2006-01-03
ch 8,
abuseI do like the thoughts Barbara has about Superman and her Dad! It also seems that Catwoman has turned bad. I like the little interaction between her and Scarecrow... Also a nice twist at the end with Starman!
LuoLiBei
2006-01-02
ch 9,
abuseNo! Don't go! It's a trap! But probably Catwoman will help negate it. Very cool how you explained what Batman was really scared of, I hadn't really tried to think too hard why he was scared of bats, figured it was just kind of an opposite thing, even though that didn't fit the other's pattern. Well like the guy liked to be above people so he became scared of it, Batman liked bats so he became scared of them, but I didn't think about the deeper aspects of it. Anyway, I don't know how I feel about Barb going off to be Batgirl. Well it'll be awesome and all that, but it's going to be a kick in the head to the guys when they probably aren't in need of any more head kicks. :) Keep on writing!
MzDany
2006-01-02
ch 9,
abuseThe conversations between Bruce and Dick throughout this chapter were excellent. You really put so much thought into logical deductions as well as staying in characters. Love it, especially Dick's little pep talk about how many people Batman has saved over the years.
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Hugs from Dany
Dagmar Buse
2006-01-01
ch 9,
abuseOoh, neat! Batgirl, huh? Can't wait!

Good job, as usual. Where's more?
LuoLiBei
2005-12-22
ch 8,
abuseYippy! Nice solution to the fear of bats problem. I guess it doesn't matter who he is dressed as when he's just trying to stop one plot, though he probably won't have the instant credibility as Starman, plus if he's with Nightwing how much of a rocket scientist does it take to guess who it is? :) Also nice interaction between Barbara and Dick. I think I need to review their relationship in this AU, guess I'll just have to re-read your other stories. :) Thanks for the quick update. Keep on writing!
MzDany
2005-12-22
ch 8,
abuseVERY nice chapter! I'm happy to see it posted so soon :)
The mental visual of Gordon doing his 'superhero' thing had me chuckle *grin*
The meeting between Barbara and Dick was nice and awkwardy; I wonder if she suspects something about Dick...hm
Of course I'm still intrigued about Selina. What's her ultimate plan?
And that last part was excellent and totally unexpected. Have to mirror Dagmar's review: Nice, unexpected twist. Now Bruce and Nightwing could pass as brothers, at least costume-wise :)
I do hope this is only temporary, though. Can't have Batman be gone forever!
Hugs from Dany
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