Reviews for The Art of the Swing

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tasty cheez 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abusethat was a great story. I can see how the high you got from this ld you to make "THE SWEETEST LIES". your very good at what you do and are by far my favorite author. Not my favorite fanfic author my favorite author period. dont quit doing your thing.
Chiban-chan 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseOne word: Damn. I think I punctured something. Your fic flowed very well, and smoothly, and the way you portrayed Ninamori and Naota was surprisingly OOC, and unlike a lot of fics, their thoughts weren't in complete contrast to their actions, it was down-to-earth and straight to the point. Their actions and their thoughts reflected on their actions... It was very good, and the peculiar actions (eg. Ninamori hitting Naota with the guitar... was unexpected, but fit, surprisingly) just added to your authentic writing style. All the while keeping a sort of 'intensity' that lurked all throughout the fic, subtly, but it was there. But, to be honest, I didn't entirely understand the last couple of lines... =\| Anyway. This is an awesome piece of work. Awesome job. Ja ne~
iShallFade 2006-11-30 ch 1,	abuseI'm speechless. I really wish I could write so deep and profound.
dragonsroar 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseI'll say this much for the story. It had depth, a great deal of depth. It had the FLCL depth without much of the FLCL humor. Granted I would have liked it more with more humor I have to say that this was a very well written story that deserves merit. I can't ask you to continue this, but writing more stories is something that you should pursue, even if it wasn't quite FLCL. Don't take my review the wrong way, the story had me on the edge of my seat and panting for more. Guess nobody can have everything they want all at once. Once again, awesome story!
Ayaia of the Moon 2006-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI stand awed. This is extremely well-written, and I applaud you. I think it gives a certain...closure to the series. Well done. ~Ayaia
krizzlybear 2006-08-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great contribution to the FLCL section. This show is my absolute favourite anime, and the story remained faithful to canon. I just feel, however, that Nina's sincerity towards naota's issues don't seem to match her somewhat selfish nature in the anime. However, the fact that you used her sexually aggressive nature to romantically confront Naota was a good idea, and carefully executed. Other than the odd typo here and there, there's no reason this shouldn't be on my fav list.
Mereo Flere 2006-06-28 ch 1,	abuseThis was really powerful throughout the entire story. There were a few problems with some sentences, but there were absolutely no consistent errors, and the concept of the story itself is just amazing.
Verb@l Kint 187 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseFirst, I'd like to apologize for taking so long to make good on my promise to review. I've been rather pressed for time as of late. Still am, which is why I chose this story to read rather than your longer piece. With that, I'd like to say...this was really good. And I mean that. I feel kind of silly, because you asked for a in depth review and the best that I can come up with is some minor quibbles with format, structure and mechanics. Format: There were a few points...I think three total where your italics came through as code rather than as text in italics. Structure: There were a few places where sentence structure could possibly be improved on. Mechanics: There were a few cases of awkward sentence structure, but they were really isolated. I could point them out here, but I'm not sure if you put this story behind you already. If you'd like to know the exact places, tell me and I'll e-mail where I thought I saw some issues. But overall, this is a really solid piece of writing. The narration is solid. The purpose is clear. Characterization, I can't really be a good judge, I've seen FLCL but it's not my territory. Writing style and devices were used with above par competence. You have a genuine fucking talent for writing. Good job dude.
Story Weaver1 2006-03-02 ch 1,	abuseWOW! This is an amazing piece of the underside of FLCL. The way you describe Noata's swing was deeply moving, and the way it's written reminds me of how Naota talked in the show. The part at the end about the song was even more so.
deGorgeous 2006-02-14 ch 1,	abuseexcellent story. i was happy to see the rare pairing of Eri and Naota. you did a great job of keeping them in character. nicely done.
Rgr 2006-02-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseSimply wonderful.
Advinius 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon.	abusebravo. You have successfully captured the undelying longing i felt all through the series. the language use here is pretty good, although the dialoge feels a bit like reading a script sometimes rather than a story, if that makes sense ... but excelent read. one of the top 3 FLCL fanfics i've personally read anywhere.
feifiefofum 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abusegood god, but i do love a good ninamori/naota fic... twas very pretty. the fic really puts you into the whole FLCL world, marvelously done on that count. there were a few errors here and there, a misspelled word, and an order of words problem. these were relatively few, considering the length of this thing. again, i must say, nicely done. do hope you'll keep writing.
AlyssaSS 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abuseGreat fanfiction. You really made the fanfic look just like a real FLCL episode. Congratulations, you made it so real and sensative not many authors can. Keep writing, you are in my favorite author list.
VASHATSOCOM 2005-11-22 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant just brilliant. Great job.

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