Nice. I thought the negotiating thing ended too fast though. I thought there would be one more scene where the Tau'ri refused to make a treaty with the double crossers.

It seems odd that hotheads who can't keep their mouth shut ( Vala and McKay ) are on a negotiating trade mission...

You could have ended this here, but I'm glad you didnt!

Slightly dodgy English but pretty good overall... I'd suggest using more contractions to make it look more natural - "it's" instead of "it is", things like that.
Nice story though. I'll have to go looking for sequels...

no offence，really a stupid story

*sigh* Wish it didn't have to end!! But it is a beautiful piece of writing... the way you put the SGA characters in there and just the warm, fuzzy sweetness. Wonderful! Long live S/D and your writing!! :D

Please, keep it going!

I love Sam and Dan time!! Can't wait for more.

Happy writing,
Kaite

I've been telling you how much I am enjoying this but let me say it again. The Stargate Atlantis crossover is interesting. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.

you think cassie would be married by now and nearly be taking care of her own kiddies if it's been 2 years!

*shudders* never would i ever go bunjee jumping. i would consider sky-diving though, i know weird.
Very good story, and well i thought it would be s/j, i was surprised. first sam/daniel fic i've read, but im afraid will probably be the last. i did like it though, but its too much brother and sister for them for me. Great story anyway! i like how you incorporated the 20 feet thing in it.

oh great ending
explained the title too which is good cos i didnt have a clue what that was about

Aw, Sam and Daniel are so sweet!! :) I love the outcome of this so far, especially the scene between them and Jack. Great story, can't wait for more... and...

LONG LIVE SAM/DANIEL!! :D

Excellent looks good want more

now thats a story to wake up to
and iit was almost like the show
well maybe if you squint a bit
lol