Awesome story! I rarely come across stories such as this that is worth the read. The simplicity of the style of writing, the emotional depth, and almost everything about this story is superb. Thank you for this gem.

Ah... wow. This was simply beautiful. Your portrayal of everyone was perfect, and the emotion conveyed the right depth without being overdone. Again, great job.

Very poignant, very heartfelt, and VERY well thought up & written, although I DID get very teary eyed.

Kudos for a beautiful oneshot!

oi!
Off center, but I loved it.

ooh, how I love this story. it is beyond samrt and so well written. i found myself rereding it just to "feel" it again. very impressive.

:)

Beautiful story. You have a very lyrical way of writing that suited your story quite well. It's nice to see something both original and well-written--you give Sango a depth of character that many fan-fictions lack. Thank you for writing!

Wow!

The story left me speechless...

I love the spare writing and the way that you were able to wring such emotions out of the characters. I felt so sad for poor Miroku - wanting to hate, yet unable to, the man who gave his Sango everything.

Wonderful story.

Huh... you don't see this pairing every day, and damn if I wasn't going to pass it up.

I'm not quite sure I got the lily motif, but everything else is just as deep and meaningful. You don't find a story like this in the usual pile.

Thank you for your superb work.

A mind-blowing character introspection that gives Kuranosuke a depth that most fanfics deprive him of. Well-flowing, creative, and bone-chillingly possible. It's a wonderful look at "what if," one that so deserved a second review. ~_^ Know that I will be fav'ing this now and that reading it again didn't even start to lessen the impact of the final lines. Beautiful work!

For the first time in months and months and months, I take a peek back into Inuyasha fandom. What do I find? Most of the same-old, same-old; things that I've read before and have little desire to read again.

Oh, and this too. Something completely different, out of the box, and like nothing I've ever seen. Brilliant, absolute genius, and every other word of praise I can give you.

Back when I used to be an avid member of Inuyasha fandom, I was a die-hard supporter of Mir/San, thinking that alternate pairings were just plain blasphemy. Thank you for proving me wrong. This is definately one of my favorite stories now.

~~Keera

Aww.. this is so sweet!
It's got to be one of the best Sango/Takeda fics I've read.
Good job! ^-^

*Sniff sniff*

WOW. WOW. WOW.
That was just-- I am at a loss for words.
YOU'RE STORY IS PROBABLY AMONG ONE OF MY
MOST FAVORITE STORIES EVER. Dayum I am so
articulate, ne? Hahaha. Anywho, I cried man.
Tears. I'm so happy that Sango found her happy
ending. I find it sad how people dislike Takeda.
I for one think he's a friggin genious! I mean
here's Sango, beautiful and skilled, but the
guys go for Kagome?! They must be blined. Or like
intimidated. Yes. Well, I'm off to read your
other stories (: Thanks so much for adding to the
Inu-fandom.

Ja Ne!!~

*throat is raw*

That was the best damned one-shot I have ever read. Thank you for writing that. *hugs*

And I think my pink eye is clearing up too.