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Bad Wolf Jr
2009-11-17 . chapter 21
Oh! Cliffhanger! SO not fair. SO SO SO SO not fair. *grumpy glare*
I'm totally digging this story. I seriously do like it. You've got a really nice writing technique. Everything's well written, and described, and... my day off from school's not helping my grammar/spelling much. Not much at all.
Urgh. It's too hot. I hate summer.
Well, keep the good ideas flowing! Update whenever you feel like it (don't let pushy people put you down), and BON VOYAGE!



I've never actually said that before. Bon voyage. BON voyage. Bon VOYAGE. BON VOYAGE.

No, it doesn't seem right... =S

Well done!

Wolf. xx
aisuru Aki
2009-07-27 . chapter 21
so good but must need SBRL <3
japachinglish
2009-07-25 . chapter 11
You go Moony! Tell them their all nuts!
lolololololololololololololololololololololol
vindictivelemon
2009-07-18 . chapter 21
I just went back and re-read hand in hand, my all time favorite. i need to re review and remind you u are a wonderful writer. The best. Hilrius to boot. nothing makes me fall off my chair more. hand in hand was my first ever read fanfiction. completly by chance too, you just happened to update and it was at the top of the general list. i stayed up the entire night, and thus began my unhealth fanfic addition.

I love the direction your going with in this story, having james find out about the half blood prince (akwardly with snape) instead of lily will only add more confrentation, secrets and mistery.

I also love the sirus scenes in between. it add the comidic relief we so desperatly love. You truely add demensions to the maurauders that fit j.k's begining, and plush them further. not the smae old romanticized versions most fan ficts spit out. james is not always the handsome smart hero, occassionally he cant write a love letter. remus tries to look after them and well sirius is our loveable hormanal 16 year old.

im sorry everyone is giving you hate mail. that is just unforgivible of them. i know your writing rivials j.k r and ever since the seventh book finished we all have absolutly nothing better to do, but thats no escuse for them to be rude on fanfiction.

hugs
good luck writing and getting all your work done
jennifer
CharlieSchulz-
2009-07-13 . chapter 21
NO! NO! You stopped writing this two years ago!! Now I will never know how this ends! NO!

It was so effing funny...
Sunshine My Love
2009-07-13 . chapter 21
Ahh it was such a good story!! I can't believe it ends on a cliffhanger ;__;
Annunminuialiel
2009-07-11 . chapter 21
Great story and ideas! I hope you add more soon.
corned-beef-famine
2009-07-03 . chapter 21
This story is so amazing! I'm apologize for not reviewing earlier! Your stories are my favorite to read, they're so funny!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! (If there still one...)
imadoodlenoodle
2009-06-30 . chapter 21
I know your probably not going to update this again and it's a shame because this story and its predecessor were fantastic. It was funny and romantic with good OCs and yes it was probably a bit OOc we don't know for sure do we? It was great, you were great! I read greatly. Ignore that last line...
thosehooligans
2009-06-28 . chapter 21
HAHAHAHAHA!

Snape's gonna get it now :)

LOVELOVELOVElovelovelovelovelovelove *and so on* the fic

so

update when you can :)

Not presumptuous, just human.
thosehooligans
2009-06-28 . chapter 18
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thosehooligans
2009-06-28 . chapter 17
what great timing lily

DUn dun dun DUN
thosehooligans
2009-06-27 . chapter 16
MANGO
thosehooligans
2009-06-27 . chapter 15
God Lily! What is he SUPPOSED to think!?!?!?! It's your EX damn it! Sigh. Gotta respect the classics. Oh yeah, this is fanfiction, I don't :P WHAT IS UR EFFING PROBLEM LILY?!?! YOU REACT WORSE THAN JAMES!

You can get mad and he can't?

God

Books annoy me

But they make me happy :D
thosehooligans
2009-06-27 . chapter 9
I could bet a zillion bucks that was snape

f%&k you snape!
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