This is an awesome story! I read this all in one sitting, I couldn't stop. You potrayed Delta Squad perfectly, none of them were out of character. And the action was great, very detailed. I don't know if you plan on making a sequel, but if you do, I'll definitely read it.

No! We need a sequel! Palpatine cant win!

Oh yeah... excellent fic.

Well, I must say...you're as good with the big hairy cliffhangers as Lucasarts. Lucasarts leaves us with an ending that has Sev's fate a big mystery (I swear--they had better do a sequel) and you leave Delta squad at the mercy of Palpatine. Well, enough of that. This was a very good story with everyone in character. I hope you do a sequel (BG)...

How cool is this...I'm on the Halo forum reading Echoes of Eternity when I check out your bio and voila! A Republic Commando story. I love that game! When I finish reading the latest installment of Echoes, I'll start on this one...

Oh no! Not Order 66! Good writing, you most likely have Boss's reaction accuratly.
~PhoenixAvenger~

Adding to my favorite list. Keep up the writing.
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Excellent but kinda short... which is okay.

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Good battle scenes... well that's all I have to say actually!

~PhoenixAvenger~

“Holy nerf herders!” LOL...

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Now your story makes the commandos realistic from the game. Which is good, I like it.

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Sounds like a debriefing...hmm.

~PhoenixAvenger~

erm intresting ending will Delta squad survive

I sure hope so as I like them make a sequal

... Do I smell a sequel...??


Excellent story, Mathen Nors! I enjoyed every bit of it!

YES! Go Boss!

Da da da dum...

Go Delta! Go Yoda! Go wookiees!