 Outspoken Lamb 10/15/06 . chapter 1You know I've always wondered what an aerodactyl will think about the modern era, and I'm quite disturbed that it thinks we look like primapes! I think this story is well written despite what other people think.. |
 bannonluke 11/4/03 . chapter 1I'm surprised to see you doing such a serious fic. It was very good though, I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work |
 Jay-Chan3 7/13/03 . chapter 1it was ok. exelent story idea, kewl way of writting it_! |
 The GirlieGyarados 12/29/01 . chapter 1O.O...I like a lot...That eppy, where they revive the ancient pokemon, that's my most favoritest episode of all in the original series. I wuv Aerodactyl...snff...WHY'D IT HAFTA DIEEE? WAAAHHH! I think that the Aerodactyl shoulda eaten Ash! ::shakes fist at Charizard:: Charizard, you know I love you, but waaaaaaaaiiiiee did you hafta save Ash? (Charaizard replies: I dunno, girl...I guess it was the whole 'stealing-prey' instinct. Me: So, you identified Ash as your prey, and because the Aerodactyl stole it, you went after him, with the intention of getting Ash for yourself. Charizard: Yep. But then that @$%$#%! Jigglypuff had to sing and put everyone to sleep, so I lost my chance...and all the other times, there was always that electric rat protecting him, or some other water or ground/rock type there. So...I await my chance..just gotta wait a little more..)
Hehehehehe...Well, I do so love this story... Baibai! |
 tom steve si and nik 7/22/00 . chapter 1 We all agree that this is a piece of s*itty s*it. |
 Charles RocketBoy 6/2/00 . chapter 1Themadhacker has struck again. TMH, we know you are sad. You don't have to tell everyone. Spamming me under MY OWN WEBNAME just proves how sad you are. You are a disgrace to fanfiction.net and deserve to be deleted. See my rant, " Imposters Imposters Everywhere! ". If you spam it under MY WEBNAME,you will just show how sad you are. Did I mention you are sad? |
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 themadhacker2 5/28/00 . chapter 1SERIOUSLY, CHARLES, I USED TO THINK YOU WROTE GOOD STUFF, BUT THIS SERIOUSLY SUCKS. I HAVE NO APPRECATION OR THIS SORT OF DOGCRAP |
 LINK 2000 5/20/00 . chapter 1Charles, this is U're entry? Hmm not bad. |
 Mewtwo213 5/17/00 . chapter 1 AAAAAHHHHHH! BEHOLD THE MIGHT OF AERODACTYL! |
 StarGlider 5/17/00 . chapter 1Good idea. Good writing. Sad, though. Still, I liked it. |
 Cori Falls 5/17/00 . chapter 1 Whoa! Cool POV from "Attack of the Prehistoric Pokemon." |
 R.B 5/17/00 . chapter 1 Areoooo! _ |
 Bluewater Vaporeon 5/16/00 . chapter 1 Wow! A very unusual story! I've read a few other fics written from the point of view of a pokemon, but this is one of the most effective. Great job! |