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royalhighness789
2009-06-26 . chapter 4
I'm reading this years after it was first published and I can't believe I missed something this good! I love your writing! That was very sweet and very House-ish. I hate how OOC some fanfics make House or they rush the Hameron relationship so that they seem to all of a sudden fall madly in love with each other, which is so not House. I like your interpretation of what could have been. This is definitely a favorite of mine!
SoNotEmo
2008-08-16 . chapter 4
Aw, if I was signed in, this would definitely make it to my favorite's list. Remind me to put on my fav. author's list, will ya?

XOXO, SoNotEmo

P.S. you don't actually have to remind me.
xxBuffyfreakxx
2007-04-14 . chapter 4
Nice work i really enjoyed it. :D the way you write them is so well done. i love it. :D
Cherry Blossom 4 Ever
2007-02-03 . chapter 3
i loved the body works exhibit but the pregnant woman was kinda sad...
Labyrith
2006-08-22 . chapter 4
I love love love it! i know im about 6 months to late but still you rock! Thanks for these awesome stories!
Chibi Tenshi
2006-08-14 . chapter 4
GREAT third date! It's SO House. Personally I wouldn't have been able to stomach the exhibit, but I hear it's quite incredible to look at. You covered the impact of the pregnant woman on Cameron SO well, and of course, House's remorse and guilt over who he is, and who he warned her about... but still, he wants to be something more. AH he can't help it! And now, I feel traces of my carpal returning. I really do hope your health is getting better, and that everything is okay with you. Loved the fic as always - goes without saying. ^_^
Dannie Tomlinson
2006-06-26 . chapter 4
Excellent fic! Loved it!
DollPartsRealHeart
2006-06-13 . chapter 4
cute story.
kaleidoscope
2006-05-20 . chapter 4
I just finished your stories and plan to go look for the sequel
to this one. You write House and Cameron so beautifully, I can't stop reading. I am glad you began to feel better, and
hope it continues. Thanks again for the sweet, sexy writing!
okelay
2005-12-06 . chapter 4
aw... how cute.
i don't think i could ever attend an exhibit like that, but it's very...them.
great job
BB - MiSa - HarMony - Jate-4EV
2005-11-26 . chapter 4
That was great. Please update it soon, can't wait to read what happens in the morning.
barfbag
2005-11-25 . chapter 4
Just read Second Date and this one and I think they're great. You're doing a good job with your characterization. The exhibit they went to is disturbing, and wow do I ever hope that was just made up in your imagination!

Anyway, I do hope to see their fourth date at least :D
wanderingsmith
2005-11-24 . chapter 4
“, she was done with turning herself into the cutest, sweetest, best version of herself.” Thank god!

“, or was it just the confidence that came naturally from over a year of working some of the most challenging cases she’d ever seen” or of beeing challenged to stand up for herself by the most obnoctious, annoying, sexy…

“. Jealous boyfriend taking an instant dislike to the interloper.” I **can’t ** believe no one has done a fanfic about that obvious fact!. I could just see a little add on of the Good Doctor (I didn’t like him either) askig Foreman during treatment if House was always such a louse, and foreman saying he was asking for it, treading on his toes.. confision about medical toes, foreman silently pointing to a walking by alyson…. Or something to that effect

“She wondered if he knew that she’d wished those lips had been his” I so wonder if she slipped the wromng name in Hunting. It wouldn’t make me forgive thestory line,.. but over time it’d help

“She had never really contemplated the quirks of his insecurity.” Odd the blideers we clip on when meeting people

“Men he compared unfavorably to.” Sigh, silly man. Though I guess it’s just as well, the last thing I can stand is someone like chase who thinks highly of themselves

“disheveled, thoroughly insulting person.” Disheveled… yummy

“He’d revealed more personal information in those five minutes than” I loved that part of the ep. First time I’d seen him actually open to someone. And for it to be aly YES!

“slipped her hand into his as they walked into the building, and was only mildly surprised when he actually held on” and that is a beginning

“I’ll accept that as a compliment.” Hope he *does learn to

“witnessing death. House turned towards Cameron as those words reverberated through the sound system, but this time she was the one who kept her gaze studiously trained on the podium” I admit I don’t get what you were trying to show here. Is she teasing because he pretended no to notice her looking? Is he wondering about her reaction to seeing death…?

“You got over that shrinking violet routine a year ago. Don’t start up again,” he said. “And for the record, I’m fairly certain you’re the one who should be ashamed to be seen with me, not the other way around. I’m not such a bastard that I don’t realize that.” That was grgeat on so many levels!! I started to list some.. but their feelings morethan actual explanations.. kinda like the only real answer possible to “why do you like me”

A breath. Then another. > him. or her?
“You were pregnant.”

“Dropping her woven shawl on top of his jacket” love that image!

What?” she shouted back in the same brassy, confident tone > that’s my girl. Or more to the point, ,House’s

Oh please please, can’t wait for the next intallment
Mayflower
2005-11-24 . chapter 4
Thanks for the upbeat ending. Just what I needed after having to endure this week's episode of The Twilight Zone with House characters in it. Looking forward to your future postings.
Nikelodean
2005-11-24 . chapter 4
Excellent!! Hope you've started Fourth Date?!
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