Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: Two Halves of One Whole
Legitimately 6/29/07 . chapter 1
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet. I know I read it.

Anyways, this was really well written. I liked that the viewpoint was from David's point of view.

The closet essay was an interesting take, I hadn't thought of the situation like that before.

Bravo.
elleestJenn 11/7/05 . chapter 1
I really liked it. Are you going to continue on or is that it? Because if it's not the end I think that you should update soon. If it's the end, it's a good ending but if it's not I would like to see if anything between them changes, like friendship, does Brent find out about David? You know.
Queen of Doom 11/6/05 . chapter 1
That was good. I kind of thought that Davey would admit that he was gay too, but it was good nonetheless
Giggly Pancakes 11/6/05 . chapter 1
OMG! That was so amazing! I
Ace aka Jill 11/5/05 . chapter 1
Well, great job! I really enjoyed reading it. It's got good plot construction and nothing seems out of place or anything.

I'll be happy to beta anything else! Yay!
MusiCath 11/5/05 . chapter 1
Hm... not a pairing you usually see, but you make it work really well. Kudos to that.

You captured David's analness really well, and I like your portrayl of Blink as well.

I really don't know what else to say except that the grammer and spelling are all very good. :)
Return to Top