A great story. Very good.

hey i didn't really get that could you maybe email me at that addy and explain i'd be grateful

Very beautiful, I enjoyed reading it. I liked how you described her. I think you you got something there! Go you!

Your language use is really impressive, adn the way you describe Rogue's new, icy appearance is awesome. But I must say that I'm a bit confused by the transition from the first part to the second part... But its definitely an awesome start!

Poetry to read but I don't think I get it...

Was sad, but definitely worth reading.

I have to say i didn't think much of the intro but it looks like you have quite a stroy on your hands . I just hope you take the care to develope it . good luck

Bad Begining screw U!

This has icredible potential! I love Starry Ice! Rogue is my favorite X-man. Please continue ths story!

I can't wait to read more.

This was sad. And dark. I liked it a lot.

That was cool but what happened from the beging to end?