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| krish 2008-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abuselove ur one shots...u really think about ur plot and a long story revolving around some of these scenes would be extraordinary...awesome writing keep it up and maybe just hopefully u'l take the hint and develop a longer story(?)please (A):) lol take care x |
| silvermisery 2008-02-05 ch 1,  | abuseThat was good...I like your style of writing--simple, uncomplicated, but pretty, flowing. I also appreciate your good grammar and lack of mechanical errors...dear God I can't believe I'm actually saying that, but you know how many stories on FF are in dire need of a spell checker...I mean they CAN afford a word processor if they can afford a computer right? Oh, and I love abused!Draco. |
| Fantasy Starlette 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing! can't believe that i hadn't read this sooner! i love your stories! this is definitely one of my faves! You just write so well!! Do you have a fictionpress account? Anyways, GREAT job on this one! FAVED! |
| Lovegoddess567 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseOMG ThAT WAS SAD BUT IT COULD HAPPEN |
| yourmomismyheart 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseAll right, that's it, you are NOT allowed to write such wonderful stories anymore. It's making the rest of us look bad. Really, this story is great. I think my favorite out of the three stories of yours that I've read. =] |
| Babe-ette 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abusei really like it! |
| oxlovexo 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseare you going to write another chaper? you will won't you? for me? *puppy dog eyes*? please?... oh and I loved it by the way... now please write another chapter? |
| writerchick13 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseaw. thats so sad. but i loved it. awsome job. writerchick13 |
| Shannon Michelle 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. Thank you so much for keeping everyone in character. I almost never read DMHG stuff that could actually be canon, but you've done it hear. Why does it have to be a oneshot though? Please continue this. I'm loving it. |
| Li'l Albatross 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was powerful! |
| ESP 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuse“Don’t worry, Malfoy,” she sniffed. “Decency isn’t contagious.” great line. Rowling-esque. good confrontation, though Hermione's speech went on a little too long, in my opinion. it opened fantastically, though. a great summation of hermione and draco's interactions over the years. “I used to think that you were just some poor, lonely little boy, bullied into upholding the family reputation by a man who loves money more than his own son,” great line. however. again, the last line needs a tad of help. I just can't picture Hermione huddling up in a corner to cry. Maybe standing and wiping her face with her sleeve, or sitting cross-legged, or anything other than huddling. it's a bit overdone. |
| foxeran 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseHow is it that you can say SO MUCH in so little? The way you characterize Draco is so powerful, and Hermione is almost as good. I was swept away. |
| TgIiDgUiS 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseare u gonna write Children of Light son :'( i truly miss that story it was my favorite why must u do this to me Wahh ?!?!?!!?!?!? :'( |
| tiger-lily9240 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT!! draco and hermione actually seemed realistic in character unlike some other fics! pls dont make this a one shot! u rock! |
| Hoshi-chan1 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. wonderfully written. Please continue soon. |